Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính và một số chi tiết cụ thể, nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi về thì và cách dùng từ. Vì câu hỏi nói về quá khứ, hãy dùng quá khứ đơn: “When I was a child, I had a bike” và “my father bought it for me.” Không nên dùng “give it for me in my birthday”; hãy nói “gave it to me for my birthday.” Ngoài ra, thay “bike in in my neighborhood” bằng “ride it around my neighborhood.” Có thể dùng từ nối như “At that time” hoặc “As a result” để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a birthday present when I was about eight. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời đã nêu rõ quan điểm và có lý do, nhưng cần sửa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Hãy dùng “bikes are” thay vì “bike are”, “prefer cars and motorbikes” thay vì “refer cash and motorbike”, và “the roads are often busy” thay vì “the roads is.” Cụm “distances make cycling inconvenient” có thể giữ lại vì phù hợp ngữ cảnh, nhưng nên kết hợp với câu giải thích cụ thể hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ nối như “This is because” để liên kết quan điểm với lý do.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars and motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for long distances. In addition, many roads are busy and unsafe for cyclists, especially in large cities.

× When I am a child I have a bike, my father buy it for me, give it for me in my birthday and I usually bike in in my neighborhood.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike. My father bought it for me, gave it to me on my birthday, and I usually biked in my neighborhood.

The question asks about the past, so the verbs should be in the simple past: am becomes was, have becomes had, buy becomes bought, give becomes gave, and bike becomes biked. When describing completed past experiences, keep the main verbs consistently in the past tense.

× give it for me in my birthday

✓ gave it to me on my birthday

Use to after give to indicate the recipient: gave it to me. Use on with a specific day or birthday: on my birthday. The preposition for is not appropriate for the recipient in this sentence.

× I usually bike in in my neighborhood

✓ I usually biked in my neighborhood

The preposition in is repeated unnecessarily. Use only one in before my neighborhood. Because the sentence refers to childhood, biked is the appropriate past-tense form.

× When I am a child I have a bike, my father buy it for me, give it for me in my birthday and I usually bike in in my neighborhood.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike. My father bought it for me, gave it to me on my birthday, and I usually biked in my neighborhood.

The original sentence joins several complete ideas with commas, creating a comma splice and an unclear structure. Separate the main ideas into two sentences and use and to connect the coordinated actions.

× I don't think bike are very important.

✓ I don't think bikes are very important.

The noun bikes refers to bikes in general, so it must be plural. Use the plural noun when making a general statement about a category of things.

× the roads is and distances make cycling inconvenient

✓ the roads and distances make cycling inconvenient

The compound subject the roads and distances is plural, so it must take the plural verb make, not is. The original structure also incorrectly places is between the two subjects.

× most people refer cash and motorbike

✓ most people refer to cash and motorbikes

Motorbikes is plural because most people are being discussed in general and may use more than one motorbike. The plural form is needed when referring to motorbikes as a general category.

× most people refer cash and motorbike

✓ most people refer to cash and motorbike

The verb refer requires the preposition to: refer to something. However, prefer would be the more natural verb if the intended meaning is that people choose cash and motorbikes instead of bicycles.