Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng gặp nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng khiến người nghe khó hiểu, chẳng hạn “When I watch” có thể là “When I was young”, “buy wiki” có thể là “bike”, và “by my legs” nên diễn đạt là “on my bike”. Cấu trúc câu chưa hoàn chỉnh và ý cuối bị bỏ dở. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes, I did”, sau đó nêu ai mua xe, đặc điểm của xe và bạn đã sử dụng nó như thế nào. Nên dùng thì quá khứ đơn nhất quán và thêm từ nối như “because” hoặc “so”.

Example: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was about eight years old. It was quite big and difficult for me to ride at first, but I used it to get to school more quickly.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời đúng hướng và đưa ra lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp: “by” và “my” cần sửa thành “bikes” hoặc “bicycles”, “every people” thành “many people” hoặc “everyone”, “who are surround my areas” thành “in my area”, và “using” cần có chủ ngữ rõ ràng. Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng “Yes, I think they are quite popular” rồi giải thích bằng một ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy dùng cấu trúc “because..., especially...” để liên kết ý và tránh lặp từ “go to work or go to school” nếu có thể.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities and rural areas. Many people use them to go to school, commute to work, or visit nearby places. They are affordable, convenient, and better for the environment than cars.

× When I watch, I have a buy wiki bought by my father.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that was bought by my father.

The question asks about a past period, so the verbs should be in the past tense: was and had. The phrase a bike that was bought by my father uses a complete relative clause to describe the bike.

× It is uh, very big bike.

✓ It was a very big bike.

A singular countable noun such as bike needs an article. Use a before bike because it is mentioned generally, not as a specific previously identified bike.

× It can't help me to go to my school by my legs very quickly and I.

✓ It could not help me get to school very quickly because it was too big for me.

Because the speaker is describing childhood, could not is more appropriate than cannot. After help, the base verb get can be used without to. The original sentence is also incomplete, so the final clause has been completed with a clear reason.

× In my opinion, by is very popular in my country because every people who are surround my areas, uh, using my to go to work or go to school.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because many people in my area use them to go to work or school.

The answer refers to bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is needed. The plural subject bikes also requires the plural verb are. Many people is the appropriate plural expression; people should not be used with every in this sentence.

× In my opinion, by is very popular in my country because every people who are surround my areas, uh, using my to go to work or go to school.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because many people in my area use them to go to work or school.

Every is used with a singular countable noun, such as every person. To refer to people in general, many people is more appropriate here.

× In my opinion, by is very popular in my country because every people who are surround my areas, uh, using my to go to work or go to school.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because many people in my area use them to go to work or school.

The subject many people is plural, so it must take the plural present-tense verb use, not using. The verb are also agrees with the plural subject bikes.

× In my opinion, by is very popular in my country because every people who are surround my areas, uh, using my to go to work or go to school.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because many people in my area use them to go to work or school.

My is a possessive determiner and cannot be used as the object of use. Use them as the object pronoun referring back to bikes.