Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, ‘A7’은 ‘seven’ 또는 ‘seven years old’로 말해야 하며, ‘bow heels’는 의미상 ‘training wheels’가 적절합니다. 또한 ‘light it’은 자전거를 탄다는 의미의 ‘ride it’으로 수정해야 합니다. 망설임 표현인 ‘Umm’을 줄이고, 과거의 습관을 설명할 때는 ‘used to ride it’을 사용하세요. 답변은 자전거의 색상과 사용 방식 등 구체적인 세부 정보를 연결어와 함께 자연스럽게 제시하면 더 효과적입니다.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old. It was a small black bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed riding it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

Suggestion: 의견을 먼저 제시한 점은 좋지만, ‘people often use’ 뒤에는 목적어가 필요하므로 ‘people often use shared bicycles’처럼 완전한 문장으로 말해야 합니다. ‘Kakao bike or many other brands bike’는 ‘Kakao Bikes and other bike-sharing services’로 표현하는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 단순히 브랜드를 나열하기보다, 사람들이 자전거를 이용하는 이유나 장소를 구체적으로 설명하세요. ‘because’ 뒤에 이유를 명확히 연결하고, 예를 들어 교통 체증이나 짧은 거리 이동을 언급하면 답변의 내용과 어휘가 더 풍부해집니다.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use Kakao Bikes and other bike-sharing services, especially for short trips in busy cities. They are convenient and affordable, and they also help people avoid traffic jams.

× because people often use.

✓ because people often use Kakao bikes or bikes from many other brands.

The verb use requires a direct object, but the original clause ends without one. Also, the following fragment should be connected to the main clause instead of being separated by a period. Make sure every clause has a complete structure and that transitive verbs are followed by their objects.

× many other brands bike

✓ bikes from many other brands

The noun bike should be plural because it refers to bikes from multiple brands. The corrected phrase, bikes from many other brands, clearly shows the plural noun and uses a natural noun order. After quantifiers or expressions referring to more than one item, use a plural noun.