Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答的核心意思比较清楚：你小时候没有自行车，因为学校离家近，所以步行上学。但有几个明显问题：第一，应该说“ride a bike”，而不是“write a bag”；第二，“my parents didn't tell me how to...”不自然，更准确的表达是“my parents never taught me how to ride a bike”；第三，出现了较多重复和自我修正，如“is very close, was very close”和“when I grew up and”，导致答案不完整。建议使用“直接回答+原因+结果”的结构，并控制在2—3句话内。

Example: No, I didn’t. My parents never taught me how to ride a bike because my school was very close to home, so I usually walked there. As a result, I never really needed a bike when I was a child.

Suggestion: 答案有明确观点，也提供了身边人的例子和个人原因，内容基本切题。主要问题是“write the back”应改为“ride a bike”，并且“To some extent”之后可以更直接地说明受欢迎的程度。建议使用“观点+具体场景+个人对比”的结构，并用“however”或“while”连接转折；“keep a balance”可以改为更自然的“keep my balance”。最后一句可更简洁，避免重复表达“ride a bike”和“dangerous”。

Example: Yes, I’d say bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people who live close to their workplaces. Many people ride bikes to school or work because they are affordable and convenient. However, I don’t ride one very often because I find it difficult to keep my balance, so I feel it can be unsafe for me.

× school is very close, was very close to my home.

✓ School was very close to my home.

整段内容是在谈论童年时期的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。不能先使用现在时 is，再改成过去时 was。建议在描述过去发生的事情时，统一使用过去时。

× So when I, umm, when I grew up and.

✓ So, when I grew up, I still didn’t know how to ride a bike.

原句以 and 结尾，句子没有完整表达意思，属于句子结构不完整。应补充完整的主语和谓语，使句子能够独立表达完整含义。注意不要在句末留下没有连接后续内容的连词。