Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly in the past tense and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a clear structure: state whether you had a bike, mention when you got it, and add one specific detail about how you used it. Use accurate forms such as “I had,” “I got,” and “I dreamed of riding it.”

Example: Yes, I had a mountain bike when I was in Grade 5. I had always dreamed of owning one, so I was very excited when my parents bought it for me. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion and support it with clear, relevant reasons. Avoid confusing words such as “bags” and “backers”; use “bikes” or “bicycles.” Also, compare countries accurately by saying “bikes are cheaper in Nepal than in my country,” and finish your final sentence instead of leaving it incomplete.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and students. However, they are more expensive than in neighboring Nepal, so not everyone can afford one. Many people still use bikes because they are convenient and economical for short journeys.

× As soon as I was a child I have a mountain bike at least when I was in the grade 5.

✓ When I was a child, I had a mountain bike, at least when I was in Grade 5.

The question asks about a past experience, so have must be changed to the past-tense form had. The phrase when I was a child is more natural than as soon as I was a child in this context.

× As soon as I was a child I have a mountain bike at least when I was in the grade 5.

✓ When I was a child, I had a mountain bike, at least when I was in Grade 5.

We normally say in Grade 5, not in the Grade 5. Use in before a school grade, but do not use the before the grade number.

× As soon as I was a child I have a mountain bike at least when I was in the grade 5.

✓ When I was a child, I had a mountain bike, at least when I was in Grade 5.

The article the is unnecessary before a specific school grade. The correct expression is in Grade 5.

× At this I I think I when I was in grade 5 in the grade 5I have a mountain bike and I dream to dream to drive a bike so my.

✓ At that time, when I was in Grade 5, I had a mountain bike, and I dreamed of riding it.

The original sentence contains repeated words, incomplete clauses, and several ideas that are not connected clearly. Organize the information into one complete sentence with a clear subject and verb.

× At this I I think I when I was in grade 5 in the grade 5I have a mountain bike and I dream to dream to drive a bike so my.

✓ At that time, when I was in Grade 5, I had a mountain bike, and I dreamed of riding it.

Because the speaker is describing childhood, present forms such as have and dream should be changed to the past-tense forms had and dreamed.

× At this I I think I when I was in grade 5 in the grade 5I have a mountain bike and I dream to dream to drive a bike so my.

✓ At that time, when I was in Grade 5, I had a mountain bike, and I dreamed of riding it.

The verb dream is commonly followed by of plus a gerund when describing an ambition: dreamed of riding. Do not say dream to drive in this context. For bicycles, riding is more natural than driving.

× Yes, in my country the bags are more popular than other things because in my country the the backers cost much more higher than compared to the my neighbor country countries.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are more popular than other forms of transportation because they cost much more than bikes in neighboring countries.

A comparison should compare similar things. Bikes should be compared with bikes, not with other things in general. The phrase than bikes in neighboring countries makes the comparison clear.

× Yes, in my country the bags are more popular than other things because in my country the the backers cost much more higher than compared to the my neighbor country countries.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are more popular than other forms of transportation because they cost much more than bikes in neighboring countries.

Much more higher is incorrect because more already forms the comparative. Use either much higher or cost much more. Here, cost much more is the appropriate expression.

× Yes, in my country the bags are more popular than other things because in my country the the backers cost much more higher than compared to the my neighbor country countries.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are more popular than other forms of transportation because they cost much more than bikes in neighboring countries.

The plural noun countries is needed because the sentence refers to more than one neighboring country. Neighboring countries is the natural plural noun phrase.

× Yes, in my country the bags are more popular than other things because in my country the the backers cost much more higher than compared to the my neighbor country countries.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are more popular than other forms of transportation because they cost much more than bikes in neighboring countries.

The phrase compared to is unnecessary after the comparative expression cost much more than. Use than directly to introduce the comparison.

× Yes, in my country the bags are more popular than other things because in my country the the backers cost much more higher than compared to the my neighbor country countries.

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are more popular than other forms of transportation because they cost much more than bikes in neighboring countries.

The repeated article the and the phrase the my are incorrect. Use in my country and neighboring countries without unnecessary articles.

× So in the Nepal bikes can be cheaper so every.

✓ So, bikes can be cheaper in Nepal, and more people can afford them.

The original sentence ends with the incomplete word every and contains two clauses joined unclearly. Complete the second idea and connect the clauses with and.

× So in the Nepal bikes can be cheaper so every.

✓ So, bikes can be cheaper in Nepal, and more people can afford them.

Nepal is a proper place name and normally does not take the article the. Say in Nepal, not in the Nepal.