Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly by saying whether you had a bike. Correct the past tense in “hide” to “had” or “owned,” and use “every child” instead of “every children.” Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases such as “It’s really you can” and “really lot of.” Add one or two specific details, such as where you rode the bike or who you rode with, using a linking word like “because” or “also.”

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a great way to get around, and I often rode it with my friends after school. I really enjoyed cycling because it allowed me to spend time outdoors and explore my neighborhood.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Improve grammar and word choice: use “a popular form of transport,” “anywhere” rather than “anyway,” “cheaper than buying a car” rather than “cheaper than you buy a cart,” and “car” rather than “cart.” Avoid fillers and repetition of “really,” and support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as bikes being convenient for short journeys or useful in crowded cities.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite a popular form of transport in my country. They are convenient and much cheaper than buying and maintaining a car, especially for short journeys. In addition, they are comfortable to use in crowded areas because they can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, I hide the bike and it's really cool kind of transport and I think every children must have it.

✓ Yes, I hid the bike, and it was a really cool kind of transport. I think every child should have one.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past tense hid is required instead of hide. The past form was is also appropriate when describing the bike at that time.

× Yes, I hide the bike and it's really cool kind of transport and I think every children must have it.

✓ Yes, I hid the bike, and it was a really cool kind of transport. I think every child should have one.

A singular countable noun needs an article. Therefore, use a before really cool kind of transport.

× Yes, I hide the bike and it's really cool kind of transport and I think every children must have it.

✓ Yes, I hid the bike, and it was a really cool kind of transport. I think every child should have one.

Every is followed by a singular countable noun, so children must be changed to child. Use one instead of repeating the singular noun bike.

× It's really you can spend time a lot of with friends and really lot of and ride the bike.

✓ You can really spend a lot of time with your friends and ride the bike.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and an incomplete structure. A clear structure is subject + modal verb + adverb + main verb: You can really spend.

× It's really you can spend time a lot of with friends and really lot of and ride the bike.

✓ You can really spend a lot of time with your friends and ride the bike.

The adverb really should be placed before the main verb spend. This position clearly modifies the action.

× It's really you can spend time a lot of with friends and really lot of and ride the bike.

✓ You can really spend a lot of time with your friends and ride the bike.

The correct quantifier expression is a lot of time, not time a lot of or lot of. The article a is required in this expression.

× Yes, I think in my country it's really popular kind of transport because it's really easy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are a really popular kind of transport in my country because they are really easy to use.

A singular countable noun phrase such as popular kind of transport needs the article a. The corrected phrase is a really popular kind of transport.

× Yes, I think in my country it's really popular kind of transport because it's really easy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are a really popular kind of transport in my country because they are really easy to use.

Bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. The same change is needed in the second clause.

× Yes, I think in my country it's really popular kind of transport because it's really easy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are a really popular kind of transport in my country because they are really easy to use.

The plural subject bikes takes the plural verb are. Similarly, the plural pronoun they takes are, not is.

× You can ride anyway and I think it's really cheaper than you buy a cart yes and maybe really comfortable.

✓ You can ride anywhere, and I think bikes are cheaper than cars and perhaps more comfortable.

Anywhere means in any place and is the correct adverb here. Anyway means regardless of the circumstances, so it does not express the intended meaning.

× You can ride anyway and I think it's really cheaper than you buy a cart yes and maybe really comfortable.

✓ You can ride anywhere, and I think bikes are cheaper than cars and perhaps more comfortable.

A comparative adjective should compare two equivalent things or groups. Use cheaper than cars rather than cheaper than you buy a car. When comparing comfort as well, use the comparative form more comfortable.

× You can ride anyway and I think it's really cheaper than you buy a cart yes and maybe really comfortable.

✓ You can ride anywhere, and I think bikes are cheaper than buying a car and perhaps more comfortable.

After than, buying can be used as a gerund to describe the activity being compared: cheaper than buying a car. This creates a grammatically parallel comparison.

× You can ride anyway and I think it's really cheaper than you buy a cart yes and maybe really comfortable.

✓ You can ride anywhere, and I think bikes are cheaper than cars and perhaps more comfortable.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined without clear structure or punctuation. Separating the ideas with a comma and using a complete comparison makes the sentence clear and grammatical.