Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Uh, I don't have a bike when I use to be a child. Instead of that I had that one mobile phone which I used to play games.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Uh, I will not say that bikes are most popular in my country. Most people prefer car or bike because they are more convenient and easy to uh for and comfortable for a long distance.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Answer directly in the past tense: use “I didn’t have” and “I used to.” Avoid the unnatural phrase “instead of that”; say “Instead, I had...” Also, explain briefly why you did not have a bike or add a specific detail about the mobile phone. Keep the answer fluent and avoid fillers such as “Uh.”
Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I had a mobile phone, and I used to spend my free time playing games on it. I wasn’t particularly interested in cycling at that age.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: State your opinion clearly and avoid contradicting yourself: if bikes are not very popular, explain that cars and motorbikes are more common. Use plural nouns and natural expressions such as “cars are more convenient for long-distance travel.” Add a specific reason or comparison, and avoid unfinished phrases like “easy to uh for.”
Example: I wouldn’t say that bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient and comfortable, especially for long-distance travel. However, cycling is becoming more common in large cities because it is affordable and environmentally friendly.
× Uh, I don't have a bike when I use to be a child.
✓ Uh, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past tense is required. Use didn't have for the negative past form of have and was, not use to be, because be must agree with the subject I. Do not use use to in this sentence; used to describes a repeated past situation, while was describes a past state.
× Instead of that I had that one mobile phone which I used to play games.
✓ Instead of having a bike, I had a mobile phone that I used to play games on.
When referring to playing games using a device, use the preposition on: play games on a mobile phone. The preposition can appear at the end of the relative clause. A useful pattern is play, work, or watch something on a device.
× Uh, I will not say that bikes are most popular in my country.
✓ Uh, I would not say that bikes are the most popular in my country.
The superlative form most popular normally requires the definite article the because it identifies one group as having the highest degree of popularity. Use the pattern the most + adjective, as in the most popular or the most convenient.
× Most people prefer car or bike because they are more convenient and easy to uh for and comfortable for a long distance.
✓ Most people prefer cars or bikes because they are more convenient, easier to use, and more comfortable over long distances.
Cars and bikes are countable nouns used in a general plural meaning, so they should be plural here. Long distances is also more natural because the statement refers to distance in general. Practice using plural nouns after expressions such as most people prefer when discussing general preferences.
× Most people prefer car or bike because they are more convenient and easy to uh for and comfortable for a long distance.
✓ Most people prefer cars or bikes because they are more convenient, easier to use, and more comfortable over long distances.
The phrase easy to uh for is incomplete and does not form a correct adjective phrase. The intended meaning is easier to use. When comparing several qualities, keep the forms parallel: more convenient, easier to use, and more comfortable.