Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and use a natural phrase such as “I didn’t have a real bike.” The expression “a smile to a back” is unclear; you may mean “a small toy bike” or “a tricycle.” Add one specific detail about how you played with it, and check article use and word choice, especially “a bike” rather than “any real bike.”

Example: No, I didn’t have a real bike when I was a child because my parents were worried about my safety. Instead, I had a small toy bike that I played with at home. I enjoyed pretending to ride it around the living room.

Suggestion: Your answer has a clear opinion and a reason, but some phrases are unnatural or unclear. Replace “delivery or cars cycling in everyday” with “delivery workers and commuters cycling every day,” and replace “I am also right to go to the market” with “I also ride my bike to the market.” Use a more specific example and connect it with a linking word such as “For instance.”

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For instance, many students and delivery workers cycle around the city every day. I also ride my bike to the local market because it is quicker than walking and easier than finding a parking space.

× No, I did not have any real bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety.

✓ No, I did not have a real bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety.

In this sentence, bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. Alternatively, you could say I did not have any bikes, using the plural noun with any.

× I only had a smile to a back that I played with at home.

✓ I only had a small bike that I played with at home.

The phrase smile to a back is not grammatically or semantically correct in this context. The likely intended phrase is a small bike. Use that I played with at home to introduce the relative clause describing the bike.

× For example, you can see students and delivery or cars cycling in everyday.

✓ For example, you can see students, delivery workers, and car drivers cycling every day.

Every day means each day and functions as an adverbial time expression, so it should be written as two words. Everyday is an adjective meaning ordinary or typical and cannot be used in this position. The nouns were also made parallel for clearer meaning.

× I am also right to go to the market.

✓ I also ride to the market.

The verb phrase am right does not express traveling by bicycle. Use the present simple verb ride to describe a regular activity. The adverb also is placed before the main verb: I also ride.