Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly using the past tense because you are talking about childhood. Correct the articles and phrasing: say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I don’t have bike,” and “when I was a child” rather than “when I was child.” Avoid repetition such as “at that time” and express the final idea more naturally as “my parents gave me my older brother’s bike” or “my parents bought me a bike.”

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, when I started college, my parents gave me my older brother’s old bike. It was extremely useful because I could ride it to campus every day.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons or examples. Replace unnatural expressions such as “too much popular,” “from the teenagers till the all those people,” and “bike selling” with “very popular,” “among teenagers and office workers,” and “the best-selling motorcycle brand.” Avoid redundancy such as “currently right now,” and use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Example: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially among teenagers and office workers. They are affordable, convenient, and suitable for travelling through heavy traffic. In particular, Royal Enfield is one of the most popular and best-selling motorcycle brands.

× No, I don't have bike at that time when I was child, but when I joined my college then at that time my parents had gifted me a bike of my Big Brother.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but when I joined college, my parents gave me a bike from my older brother.

Use the past tense didn't have because the question refers to the student's childhood. The singular countable nouns bike and child need the articles a. The phrase of my Big Brother uses the wrong preposition; from my older brother is appropriate when identifying the source. The expressions then and at that time are unnecessary and make the sentence structure awkward, so they should be removed.

× Yeah bikes are too much popular in our country from the teenagers till the all those people going in offices.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, from teenagers to people who go to work in offices.

Very popular is the correct expression in this context; too much popular is not grammatical. Use from ... to, not from ... till, to describe a range. The phrase all those people going in offices is missing a relative pronoun and a verb, so people who go to work in offices provides a complete and grammatical structure.

× Also bikes are popular in almost each and every age group.

✓ Also, bikes are popular among almost every age group.

Almost every age group is the natural quantifier phrase. Using each and every together is unnecessarily repetitive here. Use the preposition among when describing popularity within different groups.

× Currently right now Royal Enfield is the most popular brand for bike selling.

✓ Currently, Royal Enfield is the most popular brand for selling bikes.

Currently and right now have the same meaning, so only one should be used. The gerund phrase for selling bikes is grammatically correct after for, and bikes should be plural because the statement refers to motorcycles generally. A comma after Currently improves the sentence structure.