Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızın ana fikri anlaşılmıyor; bisikletiniz olup olmadığını doğrudan ve net biçimde söylemelisiniz. “I had a bike” ifadesinden sonra bisikletin rengini, ne zaman kullandığınızı veya onunla ne yaptığınızı ekleyin. “It’s a red 1 for the character” ifadesi bu bağlamda doğal ve anlaşılır değil; doğru kelimeleri ve basit cümle yapılarını kullanmaya dikkat edin.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school. I especially enjoyed riding it with my friends.

Suggestion: Cevabınız soruya kısmen yanıt veriyor, ancak tam bir cümle ve destekleyici ayrıntı içermiyor. “Bikes are very popular in my country” şeklinde doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun; ardından bunun nedenini veya bir örneği “because” ya da “for example” gibi bağlaçlarla açıklayın. “Header bicycle” ifadesi anlaşılır değil ve bağlam içinde doğal kullanılmamış.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them to exercise and to travel short distances because they are cheap and environmentally friendly. For example, you can see many cyclists in parks and on city bike paths.

× Yes, I heard back, it's a red 1 for the character.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red.

Because the question asks about your childhood, you should use the past tense. Use had instead of a present-tense form, and use was instead of is. The phrase a red 1 for the character is unclear and should be replaced with the grammatically appropriate phrase It was red.

× Yes, very popular in my country. Header bicycle.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I have a bicycle.

The first part is missing a subject and a verb. Add bikes as the subject and are as the verb. Header bicycle is not a complete or grammatically meaningful sentence; I have a bicycle is a complete sentence with a subject, verb, and object.