Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor; ancak geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “have” yerine “had” kullanmalısınız. “Spike” burada yanlış kelime; bisiklet için “bike” veya daha doğal olarak “bicycle” denir. Cümleyi bir ayrıntıyla, örneğin bisikletin görünüşü veya onu nerede kullandığınızla genişletin.

Example: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Suggestion: Fikrinizi belirtmeye çalışmışsınız, ancak cevap tamamlanmamış ve anlaşılması zor. “Bike is don't popular” yerine “bikes are not very popular” yapısını kullanmalısınız. “People people” tekrarından ve “umm” gibi dolgu ifadelerinden kaçının. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtladıktan sonra tek ve açık bir neden verin; örneğin insanların işe yürüyerek gitmesi veya toplu taşımayı tercih etmesi.

Example: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer to use public transportation. In addition, the roads are not always safe for cyclists.

× Yes, I have a red spike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a red spike when I was a child.

Use the past tense had because the phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past. The present form have is not appropriate here.

× Actually I think umm bike is don't popular in country because people people are woke and umm.

✓ Actually, I think bikes are not popular in my country because people are woke.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bikes in general. Also, the repeated word people should be used only once. Practise checking whether a noun refers to one item or a general group.

× Actually I think umm bike is don't popular in country because people people are woke and umm.

✓ Actually, I think bikes are not popular in my country because people are woke.

The subject bikes is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb are. Do not use is and don't together. Use are not or aren't with a plural subject.

× Actually I think umm bike is don't popular in country because people people are woke and umm.

✓ Actually, I think bikes are not popular in my country because people are woke.

Country needs a determiner in this sentence. My country is appropriate because the speaker is referring to their own country. Remember that singular countable nouns and specific places often need an article or another determiner.