Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan soruya verilmemiş; sınavda doğrudan ve açık bir yanıt verin. Kısa bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın (evet/hatta hayır), ardından 1-2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) kullanarak konuşmayı akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirin. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (umm) azaltın.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was about eight, and I rode it almost every day after school. For example, I used to cycle to the park with my friends, which helped me become more confident on the road.

Suggestion: Cevap fikir içeriyor ama dilbilgisi ve netlik zayıf; net bir konu cümlesi kurun ve ardından spesifik destekleyici nedenler verin. Bağlaçlar (however, but, because) ile cümleleri bağlayın ve dolgu seslerinden kaçının. Ayrıca zamanlara ve kelime seçimine dikkat ederek daha doğal ifade kullanın.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular, especially in smaller towns and among students because they are cheap and convenient. However, in big cities people usually prefer cars or public transport due to busy traffic and long distances.

× Yes I think bikes are popular in my country but umm bikes not using usually in the day or life.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, but bikes are not usually used during the day or in everyday life.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and word order for present passive and adverb placement. 'bikes not using usually' is ungrammatical: the correct passive form is 'bikes are not usually used'. Place adverbs (usually) before the main verb or auxiliary verb: 'are not usually used'. 'in the day or life' is unclear; use 'during the day' and 'in everyday life' for natural meaning. Also add commas for clarity and include the auxiliary verb 'are' for the present passive.