Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order mistakes, avoid repetition, and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., 'when I was about nine' not 'younger than ten years old').

Example: Yes, I did. When I was about nine my mum bought me a bike because I asked for a large mountain bike, but she accidentally bought a small wooden bike instead. Although it wasn’t what I wanted, I loved riding it around the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Answer directly then add 1–2 clear reasons with linking words. Use correct tense and avoid vague phrases like 'everyone' and repeated words. Be specific about when and why people ride bikes (e.g., for exercise in the morning, for commuting to work).

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. For example, many people cycle in the morning or evening for exercise, and others use bikes to commute to work or school because it’s cheaper and often faster in congested areas.

× I have yes I have a bike I have a bike when I was around younger than ten years old my mum bought it for me because I asked her for the big mountain bike and but she bought me the wrong one like a wooden bought bicycle.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was younger than ten years old. My mum bought it for me because I had asked her for a big mountain bike, but she bought me the wrong one — a wooden bicycle.

The student mixes present tense 'I have' with past context 'when I was...'; use past tense to match the time frame. Also remove redundant repetitions and fix word order ('younger than ten years old' is correct but 'around younger than ten' is awkward). Use past perfect 'had asked' to show the request occurred before the purchase. Replace 'wooden bought bicycle' with 'wooden bicycle'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (use past for past events), avoid repetition, and use past perfect for an action that happened before another past action.

× Yes, of course everyone used to bike actually someone used to bike for exercise in the morning and the night and the evening and someone used bike for commuting to place to place.

✓ Yes, of course. Many people used to ride bikes; some rode for exercise in the morning and evening, and others rode to commute from place to place.

The phrase 'everyone used to bike' conflicts with 'someone'; use plural quantifiers like 'many people'. 'Used to' is correct for past habitual actions; keep consistent verbs 'rode' for clarity. 'the night and the evening' is redundant; use 'morning and evening'. 'commuting to place to place' should be 'commute from place to place'. Suggestions: choose correct quantifiers, maintain parallel structure, remove redundancy, and use appropriate verb forms for past habits.