Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct, concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct factual phrasing (e.g. "it was not allowed for under-18s to ride a bike") and avoid repetition. Also watch pronunciation and remove filler words.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. In my city, it was not allowed for anyone under 18 to ride a bike, so my parents did not buy one for me.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid hesitations and repetition. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. "motorbikes" or "scooters" instead of "gas bikes", and "public transport" singular). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes—especially motorbikes and scooters—are very popular in my country. Many students and workers prefer them because public transport is often crowded and they are faster for short trips. For example, my friend saves 30 minutes each day by riding a scooter to university instead of taking the bus.

× No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child because in my city it is not allowed under 18 to go bike to to use bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in my city people under 18 are not allowed to ride bikes.

The original sentence has plural/singular inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'Any bike' is unnatural with a negative past simple — 'a bike' is correct. The phrase 'it is not allowed under 18 to go bike to to use bike' is ungrammatical: use 'people under 18 are not allowed to ride bikes.' Use 'ride' for using a bike. Also remove the repeated 'to'. Suggestion: simplify the clause and use a clear subject ('people under 18') and the verb 'are not allowed' with 'to ride bikes'.

× Gas bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Motorbikes are very popular in my country.

'Gas bikes' is not a common or correct term in English for motorcycles; 'motorbikes' or 'motorcycles' is the correct noun. This is a word choice (adjective/noun) error. Suggest using 'motorbikes' or 'motorcycles' to convey the intended meaning.

× Uh, the people who work or uh, study prefer to use bikes instead of public transport port because uh, of because they, the public transports are very crowded and uh, uh, for their convenience, they used bike a lot.

✓ People who work or study prefer to use bikes instead of public transport because public transport is very crowded, and for convenience they use bikes a lot.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: redundancy ('uh', repeated fillers), incorrect noun phrases ('public transport port', 'the public transports'), tense inconsistency ('used bike a lot'), and awkward word order. Correct grammar uses 'public transport' as an uncountable noun (not 'transports'), and present tense 'use' to match the general statement. Also remove unnecessary articles and words. Suggest practicing concise sentences: 'People who work or study prefer bikes to public transport because it is crowded, so they use bikes for convenience.'