Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid irrelevant or confusing details. Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words to explain reasons or contrast. Pay attention to verb tenses and pronouns, and replace vague phrases (e.g., "my divisions") with clear words (e.g., "neighbourhood" or "school").

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I only had a small cycle that I used to go to my neighbourhood shops. Besides, my parents didn’t allow me to ride a motorbike when I was very young, so I mostly walked or used that cycle.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "cheaper" instead of "more cheaper", "middle-class families"). Be concise and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. This is because many people from middle-class families find motorcycles cheaper than cars, and they are also convenient and easy to park in crowded cities.

× No, when I was a child I did not have any type of bike, I have my own cycle from which I'd like to travel to my divisions and moreover my parents also did not allow me to ride a bike in a very young age.

✓ No, when I was a child I did not have any kind of bike. I had my own bicycle that I used to travel to my relatives' places, and moreover my parents did not allow me to ride a bike at a very young age.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure and tense problems (Grammar problem type ID 26). The speaker mixes past simple and present tense incorrectly ('did not have' with 'I have my own cycle'). 'Any type of bike' is awkward; use 'any kind of bike' or 'a bike'. 'Cycle' is better as 'bicycle' and 'from which I'd like to travel to my divisions' is unclear; likely meant 'used to travel to my relatives' or 'to different places'. 'In a very young age' is an incorrect prepositional phrase; correct form is 'at a very young age'. Suggestions: keep past-tense consistently for childhood events (use 'had', 'used to', 'did not allow'), split into two sentences for clarity, replace unclear phrases with specific nouns ('relatives' or 'towns'), and use the preposition 'at' with 'age'.

× Yes of course the bikes are very popular in my nation India as more of the people are belonging from middle class family in my nation so they prefer to ride on a bike because they are more cheaper and convenient and easy to park everywhere.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country, India, because many people belong to middle-class families, so they prefer to ride a bike since it is cheaper, convenient, and easy to park everywhere.

This sentence contains present tense and agreement issues (Grammar problem type ID 6) and other related errors. 'More of the people are belonging from' is incorrect: use 'many people belong to' with present simple. 'Middle class family' should be pluralized to 'middle-class families'. 'Ride on a bike' is unnatural; say 'ride a bike'. 'They are more cheaper' is ungrammatical: 'cheaper' is comparative and should not be combined with 'more'; use 'cheaper'. Coordinate adjectives require parallel form: 'cheaper, convenient, and easy to park'. Suggestions: use present simple for general facts, correct verb forms ('belong to'), pluralize nouns when needed, remove unnecessary 'more', and ensure adjectives are parallel.