Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be accurate with tense, avoid redundancy and hesitations, and organize details clearly. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (since it was childhood), then add 2–3 specific supporting details using linking words. Remove filler sounds (uh) and unnecessary technical figures unless relevant. For example, mention make, model type, color, and one memory or why you liked it.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a Suzuki sports bike when I was a child. It was a 155cc limited-edition model in black, and I loved it because it was fast and looked stylish. Because it handled well on winding roads, I often rode it to visit friends on weekends.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct small grammar errors; use linking words to structure reasons and give a specific example or statistic. Avoid vague phrases like ‘in our company’ if you mean 'in our country.' Provide two clear reasons and a brief example to support your view.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many young people prefer bikes because they are affordable and easier to park. Secondly, bikes can weave through traffic, which saves time during rush hour. For example, my cousin can cut his 60-minute commute to about 30 minutes by bike.

× Yes, I do have a bike and that was of Suzuki company which was about 155 CC.

✓ Yes, I had a bike from the Suzuki company that was about 155 cc.

The original mixes present and past tense and uses a relative pronoun awkwardly ('which' referring to company). Use past tense 'had' to match 'when you were a child'. Use 'from' to indicate brand and 'that' to introduce the description of the bike. Also use lowercase 'cc' for cubic centimeters. Suggestion: Keep tenses consistent (past for childhood) and use clear relative pronouns like 'that' or 'which' to refer to 'bike'.

× It was a sports limited edition in black color, which is whose uh highest speed was about 210.

✓ It was a limited-edition sports bike in black, whose top speed was about 210 km/h.

Original has redundant and incorrect phrasing ('sports limited edition in black color') and mixes present 'is' with past 'was' and uses 'whose' incorrectly. Use 'limited-edition sports bike' and 'black' as adjective, and 'whose top speed was' for possession in past tense. Add unit 'km/h' for clarity if speed is measured in kilometers per hour. Suggestion: Use concise adjective order and maintain past tense when describing past possessions.

× Yes, bikes are very popular among youngsters in our company, in our country as it look good on young boys and have a good speed and also it surpasses the traffic.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular among youngsters in our country because they look good on young men, have good speed, and also help to beat traffic.

Original uses 'in our company' incorrectly; likely meant 'in our country'. Subject-verb agreement errors ('it look', 'have', 'it surpasses') and pronoun reference issues ('it' unclear). Replace 'young boys' with 'young men' for age-appropriate wording and use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'bikes'. 'Help to beat traffic' is a more natural expression than 'surpasses the traffic'. Suggestion: Ensure prepositions match context ('in our country'), keep subject-verb agreement with plural subjects, and use clear pronouns referring to the correct noun.