Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Pronunciation and grammar need correction and answers should be more concise and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence using correct tense (e.g., "I had a bike when I was a child"). Avoid repetition and complete the final idea ("it could..."), and keep the answer within 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail (where you rode it or how you felt) with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") to make it coherent.

Example: I had a bike when I was a child. My dad gave me a pink bike for my birthday, and it had training wheels, so I felt confident learning to ride. I used to ride it around the park near our house every weekend because I enjoyed the fresh air and exercise.

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and add specific supporting details. Start with a direct topic sentence ("Yes, bikes are popular"). Use correct subject-verb agreement and expand with one or two concrete reasons or examples, linked with words like "because" or "for example." Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "commuting," "exercise," "eco-friendly").

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use bicycles for commuting and exercise because they are cheap and eco-friendly. For example, I see many people cycling to work in the mornings, especially in cities with bike lanes.

× When I were a child, I remember that my that my dad gifted me a pink color pink bike.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that my dad gifted me a pink bike.

The subject 'I' requires the singular past form 'was' not 'were' (subject-verb agreement). Also there is a repeated phrase 'that my' and redundant 'color' before 'pink' — remove the duplicate and the unnecessary word. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' and avoid repetitions.

× It was on my birthday and I really like that bike because it has training wheels and it can.

✓ It was on my birthday and I really liked that bike because it had training wheels and I could ride it.

The sentence mixes past context ('It was on my birthday') with present tense 'like' and 'has'. Maintain past tense for consistency: use 'liked' and 'had'. The clause 'and it can' is incomplete; supply the verb 'ride it' or another appropriate verb. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and complete verbs.

× I believe that in our country, bikes are popular.

✓ I believe that in our country bikes are popular.

This sentence is grammatically correct regarding subject-verb agreement. Minor punctuation: comma after introductory phrase is optional; removing the comma improves flow. No change to verb is necessary. (Included to show there is no error requiring correction under the listed types.)

× Nowadays most of the people who wants to be healthy use bikes also.

✓ Nowadays most people who want to be healthy also use bikes.

The noun phrase 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' and the relative clause requires plural verb 'want' to agree with plural subject 'people'. The adverb 'also' should be placed before the verb or after the object for natural word order; here 'also use bikes' or 'use bikes also' are acceptable, 'also use bikes' is more natural. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural subject and arrange adverb placement for clarity.