Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., how the bike looked or how you used it). Use linking words if you add details and avoid filler sounds like “Umm.”

Example: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me a red bicycle for my tenth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood nearly every day.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence then support it with two specific, well-linked reasons or examples. Use clearer grammar (plural/singular agreement) and linking words like “for example” or “also” to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children ride bikes in the alleys, and delivery workers often use motorcycles or motorbikes to transport goods because they are faster and cheaper in crowded streets.

× Yes, of course I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses 'did have' which is unnecessary in affirmative past-tense statements. Use the simple past 'had' to state a past possession. Suggestion: use 'I had' for clear, natural past-tense narration.

× My father gifted me gifted it me as a birthday gift. Umm.

✓ My father gifted it to me as a birthday present.

The original sentence contains a repeated verb 'gifted' and incorrect word order 'gifted it me'. Use the verb 'gift' plus the object 'it' and the indirect object with 'to': 'gifted it to me'. Also 'birthday present' is more natural than repeating 'gift'. Suggestion: remove duplication and use correct object order.

× Yes, I believe it is popular in our country.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are popular in our country.

The pronoun 'it' is vague and singular; the question asks about 'bikes' plural. Use the present simple 'are' with plural noun 'bikes' to express a general present fact. Suggestion: match number and maintain present simple for general beliefs.

× You would see in every alley of the road there is a child riding a bike and then you would also see that most delivery boys are using a bike for the products to be.

✓ You can see a child riding a bike in almost every alley, and you also see most delivery workers using bikes to deliver products.

The original is awkward: unnecessary conditional 'would', incorrect word order 'in every alley of the road', and ungrammatical final phrase 'for the products to be'. Also 'delivery boys' is informal; 'delivery workers' is more appropriate. Use simple present 'can see' or 'see' for general truths, correct prepositional phrases ('in every alley'), and a clear infinitive purpose phrase ('to deliver products'). Suggestion: use simple present, fix word order, replace informal terms, and use 'to deliver' for purpose.