Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答不是对问题的回答，而是重复了考官的话。要直接回答问题并补充一两句具体细节，使用连接词使表达自然流畅。例如说明有没有自行车、什么时候有、用途或感受。保持不超过5句。

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. I used it to ride to school and to visit friends in my neighbourhood, and it made me feel very independent. Because the roads were quiet then, I rode it almost every day.

Suggestion: 回答有内容但结构混乱，语法和用词不够准确。应先给出直接观点，然后用一到两句具体例子或原因支持，并使用连接词（for example, therefore, because）。保持句子简洁自然，不超过5句。

Example: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities because they are cheap and convenient. However, in recent years cars and public transport have become more common, so bike use varies by area.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句本身为考官的问题，语法正确，无需修改。

× Yeah, in my memory when I was young people sometimes people ride a bike on the street, everywhere.

✓ Yeah, as far as I remember, when I was young people sometimes rode bicycles on the streets, everywhere.

问题类型：26（Sentence structure errors，句子结构错误）以及5（Past tense issue，时态错误）。 错误说明及改进建议（简体中文）： 1) 原句中短语重复“people sometimes people”是冗余，应删除重复词。建议保持主语只出现一次。 2) 叙述过去的习惯应使用过去时，故将“ride”改为过去式“rode”。 3) 表达回忆时用短语“in my memory”不自然，常用固定搭配“As far as I remember”或“In my memory,” 建议使用“As far as I remember”更地道。 4) 名词复数与单数：bike在泛指他人骑行时常用复数“bicycles”或“bikes”；street应为复数“streets”以表示各处街道。 综合修改后的句子："Yeah, as far as I remember, when I was young people sometimes rode bicycles on the streets, everywhere." 你也可以改为更口语化的："Yeah, as far as I remember, when I was young people often rode bikes everywhere on the streets."