Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要时态一致、句子更简洁，并加上具体细节来丰富内容。避免重复的填充词（如“uh”），用一到两句补充原因或后果。可以先给出主题句，然后用过去时描述经历和感受。

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My father bought one for me, but I fell off while learning to ride and hurt my knee, so I became afraid of riding and avoided bikes for several years.

Suggestion: 回答要注意时态和语法一致，使用更准确的时间表达并给出具体比较或原因。加入连接词让逻辑更清晰，提供一个小预测或个人看法可加分。

Example: Bicycles were very popular in China ten or twenty years ago, but they are less common now because more people own cars and electric bikes. I think shared bike schemes briefly revived interest, but private bike use has declined in most cities.

× Actually when I was a child, I don't have a bike because my father tried to buy a bike for me and I rode it, but I fall down from it.

✓ Actually when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because my father tried to buy a bike for me and I rode it, but I fell off it.

问题类型：现在时/过去时混用（应使用过去时）。句子在讲过去的经历，应统一使用过去时态。原句中“don't have”应改为过去式“didn't have”，“fall”应为过去式“fell”，并且常用短语为“fell off it”（从车上摔下来）。建议：叙述过去事件时，整个句子都用过去时；注意常用搭配“fall off”表示从……摔下。

× So, uh, after that I felt afraid of having a bike.

✓ So, after that I felt afraid of having a bike.

问题类型：语气词/填充词与时态无关，但原句中的“uh”为口语填充词，可在书面或正式回答中去掉以更清晰流畅。句子时态（felt）为过去式，正确。建议：在正式表述中尽量避免使用“uh”等填充词，使表达更自然。

× Actually, bike is popular in China about ten or twenty years ago, but nowadays bikes are not popular because of the development of car and electronic bicycles.

✓ Actually, bikes were popular in China about ten or twenty years ago, but nowadays bikes are not popular because of the development of cars and electric bicycles.

问题类型：单复数与时态混用。首先谈过去应使用过去时“were”；“bike”应为复数“bikes”与“cars”保持一致；“electronic bicycles”常用表达为“electric bicycles”或“e-bikes”。建议：谈论过去的普遍现象用过去时（were）；名词在泛指多类事物时用复数；注意常用搭配“electric bicycles”或“e-bikes”。