Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on grammatical accuracy, concise structure, and clear sequencing. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then briefly explain why using linking words (e.g., because, so) and one specific detail. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I was afraid of riding it because I worried I would fall, so I often stayed on the pavement and only pedaled slowly.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use clearer collocations and linking words, and give one specific reason or example. Use comparative language correctly and avoid vague phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I think they are even more common abroad because many cities have safe cycle lanes, and people enjoy cycling for exercise and convenience.

× Of course I have a bike when I were a child, but I'm so scared ride a bike because I don't.

✓ Of course I had a bike when I was a child, but I was so scared to ride a bike because I didn't want to fall.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child' (present vs past tense mismatch). 'were' should be 'was' for first person singular (subject-verb agreement in past). 'I'm so scared ride a bike' mixes present with past and misses the infinitive marker—use past 'was so scared to ride a bike'. 'because I don't' is incomplete; intended meaning is past 'didn't want to fall.' Suggestion: keep all verbs in past when describing childhood and use 'to' before verbs following 'scared' or 'afraid.'

× Of course bikes are popular in my country and not only my I think this is more popular in other countries too because I think ride a bike it's so funny.

✓ Of course bikes are popular in my country, and not only mine. I think they are more popular in other countries too because I think riding a bike is so fun.

Several issues: 'not only my' is incorrect pronoun/adjective use—use possessive pronoun 'mine' (incorrect use of pronouns/possessives). 'I think this is more popular' is unclear and has subject-verb mismatch; better 'I think they are more popular' referring to bikes (pronoun agreement). 'because I think ride a bike it's so funny' has incorrect verb form and clause structure: use gerund 'riding a bike' as the subject and 'is so fun' (adjective) instead of 'it's so funny' if meaning enjoyable. Also place commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: refer back to 'bikes' with 'they', use gerund after 'think' when describing activity, and use 'fun' for enjoyable rather than 'funny' which means amusing.