Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (use past tense consistently), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "but" or "so" correctly. For example, say you had a tricycle and explain why that affected your cycling skill.

Example: Yes. I had a tricycle when I was a child, so I never learned to ride a two-wheel bicycle well. As a result, I usually preferred riding short distances close to home because I felt more stable on three wheels.

Suggestion: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and clarity. Begin with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because", "also", "for instance"). Use precise vocabulary ("ride" instead of "write"). Mention observable facts or examples such as bike lanes, commuting, or fitness trends.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily exercise and commuting. For example, I often see bike lanes in the city and groups of people cycling in parks on weekends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but uh, it's like a four wheel bike, so I cannot uh ride a bicycle as well as uh, some people who are doing with Tui and but yes, I did ha have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a four-wheeled bike, so I couldn't ride a regular bicycle as well as some other people, but yes, I did have a bike.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses and contains several forms that do not fit the past context. Use past tense verbs for past events: 'it's like' -> 'it was', 'cannot' -> 'couldn't', and remove filler fragments. Also correct 'four wheel' to 'four-wheeled' (adjective form) and 'did ha have' to 'did have' or better 'did have' corrected to 'did have' though here simply 'I did have a bike' is redundant; 'I had a bike' suffices. Suggestion: keep all actions in past tense when describing childhood and use clear adjective forms and contractions correctly.

× Yes, I think a bike are popular in my country because many people write a lot as doing exercise and also write it when I can see they are used writing Aviceke everywhere. Yeah.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people ride them a lot for exercise, and I can see bicycles are used everywhere.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement 'a bike are' is incorrect; use plural subject 'bikes are' or 'a bike is'. The verb 'write' is incorrect in context and should be 'ride'. Phrases like 'as doing exercise' should be 'for exercise'. 'Write it' and 'used writing Aviceke' are unintelligible—replace with 'ride them' and 'bicycles are used everywhere'. Ensure subject and verb agree and use appropriate verbs for the intended meaning.