Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, add one or two specific supporting details, and use linking words to connect ideas. Watch grammar (tense consistency and articles) and sentence boundaries.

Example: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to school, which was convenient and saved me a lot of time. For example, the bike cut my journey from 30 minutes by foot to about 10 minutes by cycle.

Suggestion: Complete your answer and organize it with a clear topic sentence followed by 2–3 specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, moreover, therefore) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Avoid vague phrases like “from a perspective” and finish your thought.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Because they are convenient, inexpensive and environmentally friendly, many people use them for short trips. For instance, students and delivery workers often choose bicycles since they are cheaper than motorcycles and produce no emissions.

× Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child and I used it almost every day to travel to my school it is convenient it was convenient and it saved my time.

✓ Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child, and I used it almost every day to travel to my school. It was convenient and saved me time.

Run-on sentence and inconsistent tense/phrasing. The original mixes past and present ("it is convenient it was convenient") and lacks punctuation. Use past simple consistently for past habits (had, used, was, saved). Separate into two sentences and change "saved my time" to the natural English phrasing "saved me time."

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country from a perspective.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country from a certain perspective.

Awkward phrase "from a perspective" is unidiomatic. Keep present tense "think" and use a determiner to make the noun phrase grammatical: "from a certain perspective" or simply omit the phrase: "I think bikes are quite popular in my country."

× It is convenient and environmentally friendly and do not cause any pollution and it is much cheaper as compared to other motor vehicles.

✓ They are convenient and environmentally friendly, do not cause pollution, and are much cheaper compared to other motor vehicles.

Pronoun and subject-verb agreement: "bikes" is plural so use plural pronoun "they" and plural verbs "do" and "are." Also streamline "do not cause any pollution" to "do not cause pollution" and use "cheaper compared to" or "cheaper than."

× And I think it is quite feasible to

✓ And I think it is quite feasible to use bikes instead of motor vehicles.

Sentence is incomplete (fragment). Provide the missing object/infinitive phrase to complete thought. Maintain present tense "think" and supply a clear clause such as "to use bikes instead of motor vehicles."