Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler (e.g., "uh") and correct basic grammar (singular/plural, verb forms, ages). Use linking words if you add another detail.

Example: Yes, I did. My father bought me my first bike when I was six, and I later owned a few different bikes as I grew older. For example, I got a larger one when I was around ten so I could ride farther with friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer then support with specific observations or reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "also"). Correct collocations (say "ride bikes" or "riding bikes") and tense/phrase choices ("these days").

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, I often see many people riding bikes on the streets and parents buying bikes for their children, partly because cycling is inexpensive and good exercise.

× Yes I did and I think all kids had so I had many bikes, not only one.

✓ Yes, I did, and I think all kids had bikes, so I had many, not just one.

The original mixes singular and plural awkwardly ('many bikes, not only one' is okay but 'all kids had so I had' is incorrect). Remove redundant words and ensure nouns match (kids had bikes). Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'kids had bikes' for plural consistency and 'not just one' is more natural.

× My father bought uh bought me one when I was I think 6 year olds, then 66 year six years old.

✓ My father bought me one when I was, I think, six years old.

The sentence incorrectly uses plural 'year olds' and repeats numbers. Use past tense 'bought' once and the correct expression is 'six years old' but when used after 'was' it's common to say 'six years old' or 'six'. Remove repetitions and extra digits. Suggestion: Say 'when I was six years old' or 'when I was six'.

× Then I bought another one when I.

✓ Then I bought another one later.

The original sentence is incomplete ('when I.' is a fragment). Provide a complete time reference or a general adverb like 'later'. Suggestion: Complete the clause with 'when I was ...' or use 'later' if exact time is unknown.

× Actually yeah, I think that a lot of people ride in bikes or riding bikes these last days.

✓ Actually, yeah, I think that a lot of people ride bikes or have been riding bikes these days.

Use 'ride bikes' not 'ride in bikes'. 'These last days' is unnatural; use 'these days' or present perfect continuous 'have been riding' for ongoing action. Keep tense consistent. Suggestion: Use 'ride bikes' and 'these days' or 'have been riding bikes' depending on emphasis.

× When I go out I see many individuals riding their bikes or buying bikes for their kids, so it's popular.

✓ When I go out, I see many people riding their bikes or buying bikes for their kids, so they are popular.

Use 'people' instead of formal 'individuals' in spoken English. Also 'so it's popular' is unclear; bikes (plural) should match 'they are popular'. The gerund 'riding' is fine. Adjust pronoun agreement. Suggestion: Say 'so they are popular' to match plural subject 'bikes'.