Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). For example, say you didn’t have a bike, explain why, and add a short consequence or memory.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford one, so I became quite used to walking long distances. However, I sometimes borrowed a neighbor’s bike to play with my friends.

Suggestion: Make the answer more specific and use linking words to connect ideas. Use accurate phrases (e.g., “traffic jams” not “jam”) and provide one or two reasons or examples. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, mainly because traffic jams are common and bikes can navigate faster than cars. For example, many people use bike-hailing services like Uber Moto during rush hour to save time and money.

× Actually, no, I don't have a bike.

✓ Actually, no, I didn't have a bike.

The question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; use 'didn't have' to match past context. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits or possessions in the past: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× When I were a child, I don't have bicycles.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle.

Two errors: subject-verb agreement in past ('were' -> 'was' for singular 'I') and tense mismatch ('don't have' is present). Use past simple for both: 'I was' and 'didn't have'. Also 'bicycle' singular matches 'a'. Suggestion: Say 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle.'

× Also, I walk in the.

✓ Also, I walked to school./Also, I used to walk a lot.

The original sentence is incomplete and mixes present tense 'walk' with unclear object 'in the.' It should be a complete past-tense statement about habitual action in childhood. Use 'walked' or 'used to walk' and include the destination or clarify frequency. Suggestion: 'Also, I walked to school.' or 'Also, I used to walk a lot.'

× Yes, bikes are most popular in my country because in my country we have lot of jam and in that time we call Uber.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we have a lot of traffic jams and at that time we call Uber.

Several issues: 'most popular' can be acceptable but 'very popular' is clearer. 'We have lot of jam' lacks article and plural: use 'a lot of traffic jams' or 'a lot of traffic.' 'In that time' is awkward; use 'at that time.' The verb 'call' should be present simple if referring to a general habit: 'we call Uber.' Suggestion: 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we have a lot of traffic jams and at those times we call Uber.'

× Uber's means they provide bikes, cars so.

✓ Uber means they provide bikes and cars.

'Uber's' with apostrophe suggests possession or contraction; here the base noun 'Uber' should be used. The sentence ends with 'so' which is incomplete. Use 'and' to join items and finish the thought. Suggestion: 'Uber means they provide bikes and cars.'