Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, use correct tense and avoid repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), then briefly give a reason or a short detail using correct grammar and linking words (e.g., “but I would have liked one because…”). Use past simple for past facts and conditional for hypothetical situations. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct word choice (bike, not back).

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I would have liked one because it would have helped me get around the neighbourhood and made playing outside more fun.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear sentence structure with linking words. Start with a simple opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat) and then give a specific reason or example. Use vocabulary relevant to popularity (common, popular, many people, cyclists) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular among young people in my country because many prefer them for exercise and short trips. For example, students often cycle to school or meet friends at nearby parks.

× When I was a child I didn't have the chance to have the back, but if I had the chance again I would have. I would have choose choose a bike.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have the chance to have a bike, but if I had the chance again I would. I would have chosen a bike.

The original contains multiple issues: 'have the back' is likely a miswording and should be 'have a bike' (word choice). More importantly, the conditional clause 'if I had the chance again I would have' is incomplete and awkward; 'I would' or 'I would have had one' fits better depending on intended meaning. The verb 'choose' is incorrectly used instead of the past participle 'chosen' after 'would have.' Use the past perfect or conditional perfect structure for unreal past situations: 'would have chosen' or simply 'would have chosen a bike.' Also corrected article use to 'a bike.' Suggestion: for hypothetical past events use 'would have' + past participle (chosen).

× If I do I mean these young people they are chosen to already they would like to choose a hall hail lifestyle which is in a ride bicycle

✓ I mean that young people nowadays prefer a healthy lifestyle that includes riding a bicycle.

The original sentence has several tense and structure problems. 'If I do' is unnecessary and unclear. 'They are chosen to already' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'nowadays' or 'already.' 'Would like to choose' is incorrect sequence and awkward; use 'prefer' for general present habits. 'A hall hail lifestyle' appears to be a mispronunciation of 'healthy lifestyle.' 'Which is in a ride bicycle' is incorrect word order and preposition use; 'that includes riding a bicycle' is correct. The corrected sentence uses present simple 'prefer' for general statements and a relative clause 'that includes riding a bicycle.' Suggestions: remove filler 'If I do,' use clear present tense verbs for general truths, and use 'include + -ing' for activities.