Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "I I" and repeating the same idea). Use correct articles and tense: "a bike" and "in the future."

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. However, I enjoyed watching other children ride bikes in the park, which looked fun and freeing. For that reason, I hope to buy a bike in the future so I can experience riding myself.

Suggestion: Improve coherence and grammar: use correct articles and plural/singular forms, and avoid unfinished sentences. Begin with a clear statement, then use linking words to compare bikes and motorcycles with specific reasons (cost, convenience, speed). Provide complete, concrete examples.

Example: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular, especially among young people who use them for short commutes, exercise and leisure. However, motorcycles are even more common because they are faster and better suited to longer journeys; for example, many commuters prefer motorcycles to travel between suburbs and the city center.

× No, I didn't have bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford to buy one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford to buy one.

The noun 'bike' is a countable singular noun and requires an article. Use 'a' before a singular, countable noun when mentioning it for the first time. Suggestion: use 'a bike' or 'the bike' depending on context.

× However, I I love watching children ride bikes around the streets and parks because it is fun and entertaining.

✓ However, I love watching children ride bikes around the streets and parks because it is fun and entertaining.

There is a duplicated pronoun 'I I' which is a typographical error affecting tense and grammar clarity. Remove the extra 'I'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'I love' is correct in present tense.

× But I hope to get one for myself in future because I want to have that experience of riding a bike which I never did when I was a child.

✓ But I hope to get one for myself in the future because I want to have the experience of riding a bike which I never had when I was a child.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'future' to refer to a specific time period. Also, the clause 'which I never did when I was a child' uses 'did' awkwardly with 'experience' and 'ride'; use past perfect or simple past correctly: 'I never had' or 'I never rode one' are better. Suggestion: 'the experience' and 'never had' or 'never rode one'.

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in a country among young individuals because they usually use it for transportation, exercise or just having fun with their friends or family.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in the country among young people because they usually use them for transportation, exercise, or just having fun with their friends or family.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'country' when referring to the speaker's country. 'Young individuals' is acceptable but 'young people' is more natural. Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'bikes'; use 'them'. Also add commas in a list. Suggestion: 'the country' and 'them' for plural agreement.

× However, motorcycle are quite common they are.

✓ However, motorcycles are quite common.

'Motorcycle' should be plural 'motorcycles' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. The clause 'they are' is redundant and should be removed. Ensure subject and verb number match: 'motorcycles are'.

× They are more common in my country because you can use it to travel, relax, it's large and.

✓ They are more common in my country because you can use them to travel and relax; they are also large and convenient for getting around.

Multiple problems: pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'they' (use 'them'), the list is incomplete and ends with 'and.' Also sentence fragments 'it's large and' lacks an object. Provide parallel structure and complete ideas: 'travel and relax' and explain what 'large' refers to or use 'spacious' or 'convenient'. Suggestion: use plural pronoun 'them', complete the list, and maintain parallel structure.