Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答缺乏条理且有时态、语法错误，表达不自然。建议： 1) 使用清晰的主题句直接回答（如“Yes, I did.”），注意时态一致（过去时）。 2) 使用一到两句具体支持细节（什么时候开始、经常骑到哪里、感受），并用连接词衔接（e.g. “because”, “so”, “and then”）。 3) 避免自相矛盾或不相关的信息（例如先说喜欢又说讨厌），若情感复杂可解释原因。举例词汇：started, enjoyed, learned, neighborhood, practice, competitions。

Example: Yes, I did. I started riding a bike when I was six and practiced every weekend in my neighborhood. Because I enjoyed the freedom it gave me, I became quite confident riding on busy streets. However, I haven’t done much cycling recently, so I don’t consider it a sport I still do regularly.

Suggestion: 观点表达不够清晰且用词重复。建议： 1) 先给出直接答案（Yes/No/Partly）并用一句话概括理由。 2) 用具体例子或比较支持观点（例如共享单车、通勤、休闲骑行人数），使用连接词（e.g. “because”, “for example”, “however”）。 3) 注意词汇准确性，用“means of transport”或“mode of transportation”代替笼统的“way to go”。

Example: Partly. Bikes are widely used in China mainly as a convenient means of transport, especially for short commutes and with the rise of bike-sharing services. For example, many people use bicycles to get to work or to run errands, but they are less common as a competitive sport compared with running or football.

× Of course I do, and I like ride my bike.

✓ Of course I did, and I liked riding my bike.

原句时态与提问（过去时）不一致。考官问的是“当你是小孩时是否有自行车？”，应使用过去时。并且动词搭配错误：like 后接动名词 riding 而不是不带 to 的动词原形。建议使用过去时的一致性：did / liked + doing。

× I like ride my bike.

✓ I liked riding my bike.

like 后面通常跟动名词（-ing）表示喜欢某个活动，且上下文为过去时态，应把 like 改为过去式 liked，并把 ride 改为 riding。

× Umm, since I was six years old I began to ride my bike and off before this.

✓ Umm, since I was six years old I began to ride my bike and did until recently.

原句时态和搭配混乱：since 引导的时间状语常与现在完成时连用，但此处说的是从六岁开始并持续到最近，常用 began to do ... until recently 或者 I have ridden my bike since I was six。原句“and off before this”是非标准表达，需改为更自然的表示持续到最近的短语（until recently）。建议根据想表达的意思选择一致的时态和惯用表达。

× I hate this sport.

✓ I hated that sport.

原句时态与上下文（讲述过去经历）不一致。应使用过去时 hated，并用 that 指代前文提到的“骑自行车作为运动”的概念，更符合叙述语境。

× No, I don't because I think, uh, in China, bicycle is just, uh, way to go anywhere or it's just transportation and this sport is not so popular.

✓ No, I don't think so, because in China, the bicycle is just a way to get around or just a means of transportation, and this sport is not very popular.

原句存在多处问题：1) “No, I don't because I think” 结构混乱，应为 No, I don't think so, because…；2) 缺少冠词，bicycle 前应加定冠词或泛指冠词 the/a；3) “way to go anywhere” 表达不自然，常用 get around 或 a way to get around；4) “it's just transportation” 可改为 a means of transportation；5) “not so popular” 更常见为 not very popular。以上修改保持现在时态用于一般陈述。