Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Порада: Виправте граматику та структуру, відповідаючи прямо з топік-реченням, потім додайте 1–2 деталі. Використовуйте правильні часові форми (past simple) і уникайте зайвої інформації. Наприклад, почніть з «Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.» і додайте деталь про вік або як часто ви на ньому їздили. Також намагайтеся не використовувати більше 4–5 речень.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

Suggestion: Порада: Дайте чітку позицію в топік-реченні і підкріпіть її конкретними причинами або прикладами, використовуючи зв'язки (for example, because, so). Уникайте узагальнень без пояснень. Розширте відповідь 1–2 реченнями з конкретними деталями.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting in busy cities. For example, students and workers often choose bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yes, I have when I be a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The student used incorrect present tense forms for a past-time statement. The question asks about possession in childhood (past), so use the past simple: 'had'. Also 'be' is incorrect; use the past form 'was' for the subject 'I'. Include the object 'one' or 'a bike' to make the sentence complete. Suggestion: use 'I had' and 'I was' for past descriptions: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yeah, it's the most popular thing.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The student replied to a question about bikes (plural). 'It's' refers to a singular subject and 'thing' is vague. Use a plural subject 'they' with the plural verb 'are' to match 'bikes'. Also 'very popular' is a more natural response. Suggestion: match subject number and verb: 'Bikes are very popular' or 'Yes, they are very popular.'