Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và mạch lạc. Tránh câu thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ rõ ràng và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Ví dụ: nêu rõ bạn có xe đạp hay không, khi nào bạn thường đi, với ai và cảm nhận về việc đó. Giữ câu ngắn gọn (không quá 4–5 câu).

Example: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it in the evenings with my friends and sometimes with family. We often cycled around the neighborhood for fun and to get some exercise. I remember feeling very free and excited when I rode my bike.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời rõ ràng: đưa ra quan điểm (có/không) rồi lý giải cụ thể với ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Tránh câu rời rạc và từ ngữ sai trật tự. Sử dụng liên từ như "because", "however", "for example" để kết nối ý. Giữ thông tin cụ thể: ai dùng xe, mục đích (đi học, đi làm, thể thao), và xu hướng hiện nay.

Example: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and people in small towns. Many students use bicycles to get to school because they are cheap and convenient. However, in big cities more people prefer motorbikes or cars due to longer distances and heavy traffic. In recent years, cycling has also become more popular for sport and leisure activities.

× Honestly when a try I usually ask with my friend and my family on in the evening.

✓ Honestly, when I try, I usually go out with my friends and my family in the evening.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: incorrect word order ('when a try' should be 'when I try'), wrong verb choice ('ask' is incorrect; context requires 'go out' or 'ride'), missing plural for 'friend', and wrong preposition order ('on in the evening' should be 'in the evening'). Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb-object order (Subject + Verb + Complement), ensure pronouns are correct ('I'), use plural for count nouns when needed ('friends'), and choose the correct verb and preposition for the activity ('go out' or 'ride a bike' + 'in the evening').

× And I think owned by a popular are not popular in the country because people usually multiply in the world or or go to school.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in the country because people usually use other means of transport to get to work or to go to school.

The original sentence contains incorrect word choices and adjective order ('owned by a popular are not popular' is ungrammatical), repetition ('or or'), and wrong verb use ('multiply' is incorrect). Suggestion: Express opinion simply ('I don't think bikes are very popular'), use correct noun ('bikes'), and select appropriate verbs/phrases ('use other means of transport', 'get to work', 'go to school'). Ensure clarity and avoid repetition.