Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer the question directly with a clear statement, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repeating the examiner's question and reduce hesitations. Use linking words if you add details (for example: "and", "so", "because"). Aim for 1–3 concise sentences, natural phrasing, and correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Not really), then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example: "because", "for example", "also"). Reduce fillers like "uh" and improve vocabulary (e.g., "outgoing" → "go out", "prefer indoor activities"). Keep answers within 2–3 sentences and be more specific about activities and trends.

Example: Not really. Many people in Korea prefer using public transport or cars, and they often choose indoor activities such as online gaming or social media because of convenience and long working hours.

× Uh, actually not really because in Korea people uh, usually don't want to go outgoing.

✓ Uh, actually not really, because in Korea people usually don't like going out.

The original sentence has awkward verb choice and structure: 'don't want to go outgoing' is incorrect. 'Outgoing' is an adjective, not a verb. Use the verb phrase 'like going out' to express preference. Also remove filler hesitations and place adverb 'usually' before the main verb for natural word order. Suggestion: 'people usually don't like going out.'

× They, uh, want inside like indoor activity like playing game or Internet or social media like this.

✓ They prefer indoor activities, like playing games, using the Internet, or using social media.

Multiple preposition and noun form errors: 'want inside' is incorrect — use 'prefer indoor activities' to express preference. 'Like indoor activity' should be plural 'activities'. 'Playing game' needs plural 'playing games'. 'Or Internet or social media like this' is awkward; use 'using the Internet, or using social media.' Also remove filler words. This improves grammar and clarity.