Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer, more grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and nouns (bike, not back), and avoid hesitations. Aim for 2–4 sentences, e.g. say when you got the bike, who gave it, and one memory about riding it.

Example: Yes. I had a bike as a child — my mother gave it to me when I was seven. After school I would ride it around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct vocabulary (bike-sharing, cycle lanes, rentals). Avoid vague phrases like “this kind of the public” and unclear words like “cyclones.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many cities have bike-sharing systems and dedicated cycle lanes. For example, people often rent bikes to commute to work or short trips, especially in busy urban areas where cycling is faster than driving.

× Absolutely so I have a back uh which is a gift by my mom give to me when I was 7th.

✓ Absolutely. I have a bike which was a gift from my mom when I was seven.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'by' and incorrect verb phrase 'give to me' and ordinal '7th' used for age. Use passive 'was a gift from' or active 'my mom gave me'. Use 'from' with 'gift' and use cardinal number 'seven' for age. Suggestion: say 'a gift from my mom' or 'my mom gave me a bike when I was seven.'

× I like it so much so I rented out do after the class every date when I growing up my bike is again.

✓ I liked it so much that I rode it after class every day as I was growing up; my bike was always with me.

Multiple structure errors: incorrect verb 'rented out do', wrong time expression 'every date', missing auxiliary in 'when I growing up', and confusing clause 'my bike is again.' Correct by using past tense 'liked' and 'rode' to match 'when I was growing up', use 'every day' for daily routine, and clarify meaning with 'was always with me.' Suggestion: break into clear clauses and use correct verbs and time expressions.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bicycles are popular in your country?

The original question is fine grammatically, but 'bikes' can be replaced by more formal 'bicycles' depending on register. No tense change needed. Suggestion: use 'bicycles' in formal contexts.

× Yeah, basically you can see the bike everywhere because this kind of the public, the cyclones around the city.

✓ Yeah, basically you can see bicycles everywhere because they are part of public transport around the city.

Errors: incorrect article use 'the bike' when speaking generally (use plural 'bicycles' or 'the bicycle' with definition), awkward phrase 'this kind of the public' and misused word 'cyclones'. Correct by using plural noun for general statements and replacing with 'part of public transport'. Suggestion: use 'bicycles' for general statements and clear noun phrases.

× So everyone see if you go to the job, you can rent everywhere.

✓ So everyone uses them; if you go to work, you can rent one almost anywhere.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and tense 'everyone see' should be 'everyone sees' or better 'everyone uses them'; 'go to the job' is unnatural — use 'go to work'; 'you can rent everywhere' needs an object and qualifier. Suggestion: use 'use' for habitual actions, 'work' instead of 'the job', and 'rent one almost anywhere' to be natural.