Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 이해는 되지만, 문법 오류와 불필요한 중복, 그리고 유창성(잦은 망설임)이 점수를 깎습니다. 구체적으로는 시제와 관사 사용(‘when I was a child’), 동사의 형태(‘rode’ 또는 ‘used to ride’), 빈도 표현(‘almost everyday’ → ‘almost every day’)을 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 한두 문장으로 깔끔한 토픽 문장을 제시하고 연결어를 사용해 이유나 추가 정보를 간단히 덧붙이면 더 자연스럽습니다. 연습 방법으로는 짧은 원어민 문장 모델을 듣고 따라 말한 뒤, 같은 내용을 다른 표현(예: ‘I used to have…’, ‘My father taught me…’)으로 바꿔 말하는 연습을 권합니다.

Example: Yes, I did. I used to have a bike when I was a child, and my father taught me how to ride it. I rode almost every day after school, and that helped me become confident on two wheels.

Suggestion: 내용은 적절하지만 문법(‘major students’, ‘almost riding’, ‘go to their schools’, ‘likes’)과 문장 구조가 부정확하여 자연스러움이 떨어집니다. 명확한 토픽 문장으로 시작한 뒤, 연결어(e.g., ‘for example’, ‘because’)를 사용하고 구체적인 관찰이나 이유를 한두 개만 제시하세요. 또한 수식어와 복수/단수 일치에 주의하고, ‘probably’ 대신 확신 정도에 맞는 표현을 선택하세요. 연습 방법으로는 자신의 생각을 2문장으로 요약한 뒤, 두 번째 문장에서 이유를 하나만 구체적으로 설명하는 훈련을 하세요.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students my age ride bikes to school because it is cheap and convenient, and I often see adults cycling for short trips as well.

× I did ride a bike when I was child.

✓ I rode a bike when I was a child.

The original uses 'did ride' which is unnecessary for a simple past statement and omits the article 'a' before 'child.' Use the simple past 'rode' for a past action and include the article: 'I rode a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: use simple past for habitual past actions and remember articles with singular countable nouns.

× So I almost everyday ride a bike.

✓ So I rode a bike almost every day.

The speaker refers to past habitual action, so the past tense 'rode' should be used instead of present 'ride.' Also 'almost everyday' is incorrect: 'every day' (two words) is correct, and word order should be 'almost every day.' Suggestion: for past habits use past simple and write 'every day' as two words.

× Most of umm major students around my age almost riding a bike to go to their schools.

✓ Most of the students around my age rode bikes to go to their schools.

This sentence mixes structures: 'almost riding' is incorrect here. For past habitual action use past simple 'rode.' Also 'major students' is incorrect; remove 'major' or replace with 'the' and add 'the' before 'students.' 'Bikes' plural matches 'students.' Suggestion: use past simple for past habits, ensure correct article use and plural agreement.

× And also seeing all the people likes riding a bike.

✓ And I also saw that many people liked riding bikes.

'Seeing' as a gerund is awkward here; better to use past 'saw.' 'Likes' is present third-person singular but the context is past; use 'liked.' 'Riding a bike' should be pluralized to 'riding bikes' to match 'many people.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past), use 'saw' and 'liked,' and pluralize nouns when referring to many people.