Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has several problems: grammatical errors (tense and article use), repetition, filler words, and an unfinished second reason. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, use correct past tense, avoid fillers, and complete your ideas. Add one specific supporting detail and use a linking word to connect reasons. Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I avoided riding because I felt it was dangerous to cycle in busy traffic, especially with many cars and motorbikes on the roads. Also, my parents preferred me to use public transport for safety reasons.

Suggestion: Your response is relevant and gives two reasons, but has awkward phrasing, repetition, and a slightly illogical link (motorbikes for speed and viewing scenery). Improve by stating a clear topic sentence, using precise vocabulary, fixing repetition, and providing a specific example or comparison. Use linking words like 'first' and 'second' or 'however' to structure points. Keep answers concise (2–4 sentences).

Example: Bikes are less popular than motorbikes in my country. Firstly, motorbikes are faster and more practical for commuting in congested cities. Secondly, many people prefer motorbikes for longer trips because they feel safer and can carry more luggage than a bicycle.

× Honestly, I never have a bike since I was a child.

✓ Honestly, I never had a bike since I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a time expression referring to the past ('since I was a child'). Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense when describing states that started and ended in the past (e.g., 'I had', 'I didn't have').

× You know, the reason for this is that I don't like doing things that risks my life, especially having to peddle while while looking at at cars, other transportation vehicles of course and, and and my second reason is that I don't like.

✓ You know, the reason for this is that I don't like doing things that risk my life, especially having to pedal while looking at cars and other vehicles. Also, my second reason is that I don't like it.

Multiple issues: 'doing things that risks' is incorrect because after 'things that' the verb should be base form 'risk' to agree with plural 'things' and with relative clause structure. 'Peddle' is a misspelling; correct form is 'pedal'. Duplicate words ('while while', 'at at', 'and, and and') should be removed. The clause 'my second reason is that I don't like' is incomplete; add 'it' to complete the object. Suggestions: use base verb after relative pronoun for plural antecedents, check spelling, remove repeated words, and ensure clauses are complete.'},{