Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and possessives, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep to no more than five sentences.

Example: Yes, I did. My grandparents bought me a simple blue bike when I was in primary school, and I used it to ride to school every day. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I felt confident cycling on short roads near my home.

Suggestion: Organize your reply with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and vocabulary, and use linking words to present reasons and examples. Be specific about where and why bikes are popular, avoid filler words, and finish with a complete reason. Limit to two or three concise sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas and among commuters in cities. For example, people in the countryside use bicycles to travel short distances and go to school, while city workers often cycle to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× When I was a child my grandparent bought me a very simple bike with was using by me when I went to school at primary school.

✓ When I was a child my grandparents bought me a very simple bike which I used when I went to primary school.

Error: 'grandparent' should be plural 'grandparents' if referring to both or a single grandparent must match context; 'with was using by me' is ungrammatical. The relative clause and passive/active form are incorrect. Suggestion: use 'which I used' (active voice) and 'primary school' without repetition. This fixes singular/plural and incorrect verb construction.

× It's is very popular in my country, you know, especially in the radius where people are living now in the countryside.

✓ It is very popular in my country, especially in rural areas where people live now in the countryside.

Error: 'It's is' is a duplication and 'radius' is the wrong noun; verb tense 'are living' is acceptable but 'live' is more natural for general statements. Suggestion: remove duplicate contraction, replace 'radius' with 'rural areas', and use simple present 'live' for habitual or general facts.

× We always use by for going around, going to school and even go to walks.

✓ We always use them for getting around, going to school and even going for walks.

Error: 'use by' is incorrect preposition and pronoun; 'go to walks' is incorrect collocation. Suggestion: use 'use them' (referring to bikes), 'for getting around' and 'going for walks'; maintain parallel gerund forms.

× And yes, you also can see that many people in the cities they prefer having buys for their working because of the.

✓ And yes, you can also see that many people in the cities prefer having bikes for commuting to work because of that.

Errors: unnecessary subject 'they' after 'cities' (redundant pronoun), 'buys' is misspelled (should be 'bikes'), 'for their working' is incorrect collocation. Suggestion: remove redundant pronoun, correct spelling to 'bikes', use 'commuting to work' and complete the phrase 'because of that' to clarify the reason.