Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds like "uh" and correct tense and article use.

Example: Yes, I did. I have enjoyed riding a bike since I was five, and I used to ride every weekend with my mother. For example, we would explore local parks on Sunday mornings, which helped me become confident on the road.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use clearer grammar and specific reasons with linking words. State your opinion, give one clear reason, and provide a brief example or comparison. Remove repetitions and filler words.

Example: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in Korea. The main reason is that there are few dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe. For instance, many people prefer public transport or cars because the roads are crowded and not bike-friendly.

× Riding a bike is, uh, one of my hobbies. I since I was five years old, I rode my bike every weekend with my mother.

✓ Riding a bike is one of my hobbies. I have been riding a bike since I was five years old, and I rode my bike every weekend with my mother when I was a child.

This entry contains multiple errors that match types 6 (Present tense issue), 5 (Past tense issue), and 26 (Sentence structure errors). 'I since I was five years old, I rode...' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect continuous ('have been riding') to express an action from the past continuing to the present: 'I have been riding a bike since I was five years old.' To mention past habitual action specifically during childhood, use simple past with a time reference: 'I rode my bike every weekend with my mother when I was a child.' Also remove filler 'uh' and fix punctuation and conjunctions to combine ideas clearly. Suggestion: decide whether you mean a continuing hobby (use present perfect continuous) or a past habit (use simple past) and separate the clauses with 'and' or make two sentences for clarity.

× Honestly no I don't think so because in Korea some the bikes roads are not enough to ride bike so this system is like I I heard another is popular with this.

✓ Honestly, no, I don't think so, because in Korea some bike lanes are not wide enough to ride a bike, so many people prefer other forms of transport which I heard are more popular.

This sentence has several errors matching types 27 (Subject-verb agreement), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 22 (Article errors), 26 (Sentence structure errors), and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). 'some the bikes roads' misorders articles and nouns; correct is 'some bike lanes' or 'some bicycle roads.' 'are not enough to ride bike' should be 'are not wide enough to ride a bike' (adjective 'wide' and article 'a'). 'this system is like I I heard another is popular with this' is ungrammatical; clarify intended meaning: 'so many people prefer other forms of transport which I heard are more popular.' Also add commas after introductory words and remove repeated 'I'. Suggestions: use correct noun phrases (bike lane, bike path), include necessary articles ('a bike'), use adjectives to describe sufficiency ('wide enough'), and split into clearer clauses.