Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Bro, I wasn't homeless. What? That's why I didn't have the bike when I was child, man. I just work from home to school and then, uh, I took a, a taxi to get back and uh, what up? Uh, you know what? Uh, when I get a baby, I, I bought a super car man, like Lamborghini.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Do you know what the vice is? Uh, are not popular in my country because, uh, my country owned a millionaire. All the wealthy people, most of them always have the car like Luxor, Honda or supercar. They never do the bike and also the bikes is are not like not safety, right? So we don't get a bike for.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 28.0Suggestion: Stay relevant, polite and organized. Begin with a clear direct answer to the question, avoid slang and irrelevant remarks, and keep answers concise (no more than 5 sentences). Add one or two specific details about why you did or did not have a bike (for example, travel habits, family situation, or preference). Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") to connect ideas.
Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked or took a taxi to school because my family lived far from school and it was safer. As a result, my parents preferred I travel by car rather than ride a bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 32.0Suggestion: Answer directly and support your opinion with clear, specific reasons and examples. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use linking words (for example, "because", "however", "for example") to structure your response. Mention who uses bikes (if anyone), safety or infrastructure issues, and give a brief comparison.
Example: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars, especially wealthier families who can afford private cars. Moreover, there are few bike lanes and traffic is quite dangerous, so most parents discourage children from cycling. However, bicycles are becoming more common among students and delivery workers because they are cheaper and convenient for short trips.
× Bro, I wasn't homeless.
✓ Bro, I wasn't homeless.
No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. It uses the pronoun 'I' correctly. Keep informal register in spoken answer.
× What? That's why I didn't have the bike when I was child, man.
✓ What? That's why I didn't have a bike when I was a child, man.
Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'bike' and missing article 'a' before 'child'. This is an article error (Grammar Problem Type 22) but also affects sentence structure; add 'a' to form correct noun phrases: 'a bike' and 'a child'. Suggestion: use 'a' with singular countable nouns and include 'a child' when referring to oneself as a child.
× I just work from home to school and then, uh, I took a, a taxi to get back and uh, what up?
✓ I used to walk from home to school, and then I took a taxi to get back.
Original mixes present tense 'work' with past context 'when I was a child' causing tense inconsistency (Present tense issue, ID 6, and Past tense issue, ID 5). Also 'work from home to school' is incorrect collocation. Use 'used to walk' or 'walked' for habitual past actions and 'took' for a past single action. Suggestion: ensure past-tense verbs for childhood habits and choose appropriate verbs: 'walk' not 'work'.
× Uh, you know what? Uh, when I get a baby, I, I bought a super car man, like Lamborghini.
✓ Uh, you know what? When I had a baby, I bought a supercar, like a Lamborghini.
Several issues: verb tense and aspect: 'get a baby' is incorrect for past intention or past event—use 'had a baby' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'Bought' is past, so 'had' matches. 'Super car' should be one word 'supercar' or 'super car' is acceptable but 'a' is needed before a singular noun (Article errors, ID 22). Also add 'a' before 'Lamborghini'. Suggestion: match past tense for past events, and include articles before singular countable nouns.
× Do you know what the vice is? Uh, are not popular in my country because, uh, my country owned a millionaire.
✓ Do you know why bikes are not popular in my country? Because my country has many millionaires.
Multiple problems: 'vice' is incorrect word choice for 'bikes' (vocabulary, but treated here as sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Are not popular' needs a subject 'bikes' placed before the verb for clarity and correct word order (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'My country owned a millionaire' is ungrammatical: use 'has many millionaires' or 'is home to many millionaires' (Incorrect use of verbs and singular/plural issues, IDs 1 and 6). Suggestion: use correct noun 'bikes', place subject before verb, and use 'has' with plural 'millionaires'.
× All the wealthy people, most of them always have the car like Luxor, Honda or supercar.
✓ Most wealthy people always have cars like Lexus, Honda, or supercars.
Subject-verb agreement is acceptable with 'have', but there are article and plural issues: use plural 'cars' for general statement (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Brand 'Luxor' likely meant 'Lexus'. 'Most of them always have the car' is incorrect word order and article use; remove 'the' and pluralize. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general facts and correct brand names.
× They never do the bike and also the bikes is are not like not safety, right?
✓ They rarely ride bikes, and bikes are not very safe, right?
Multiple errors: 'do the bike' is incorrect verb-collocation; use 'ride a bike' or 'ride bikes' (Verb + -ing form or collocation issue, ID 8). 'the bikes is are' has both article and verb agreement errors: use plural verb 'are' with plural 'bikes' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27; Article errors, ID 22). 'not like not safety' is ungrammatical; use 'not very safe'. Suggestion: learn correct verbs for activities ('ride'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose clear adjectives for safety.
× So we don't get a bike for.
✓ So we don't get bikes.
Unfinished prepositional phrase 'for' is unnecessary and creates sentence fragment (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Use 'we don't get bikes' or 'we don't buy bikes' to complete the idea. Suggestion: avoid leaving trailing prepositions and complete the verb phrase.