Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify the basic idea first, use correct tense and vocabulary, avoid hesitations and irrelevant words. Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then add one brief specific supporting detail using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it under 3–4 short sentences.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took the bus, so my parents never bought one for me.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms). Remove filler sounds and repeat words. Provide one or two specific supporting details and use linking words (for example, because, so, however). Keep sentences short and coherent.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many young people use them for short trips. For example, students often cycle to school and commuters ride bikes to nearby shops to avoid traffic.

× No, I have no vibe when I when I was tired. Uh.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used wrong words and pronouns: 'have no vibe' is incorrect and 'when I when I was tired' is ungrammatical repetition and tense mismatch. The question asked about possession in the past, so use past simple 'didn't have' and the noun 'bike'. Use 'when I was a child' to match the examiner's time reference. Suggestion: replace incorrect words with the correct noun and use past simple negative: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Uh, yes, umm, in my opinion, bikes is very bikes are very popular in my country and uh, younger people are using bike and uh, when they are go to outside, they are go to anywhere they are.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country, and younger people use bikes when they go outside; they go anywhere they want to go.

Multiple errors: incorrect verb form 'bikes is' — subject 'bikes' is plural so use 'are' (Singular and plural issue). 'Younger people are using bike' uses singular 'bike' with plural subject; use plural 'bikes'. 'When they are go to outside' has wrong auxiliary and preposition; use simple present 'when they go outside'. 'They are go to anywhere they are' is incorrect structure; use 'they go anywhere they want to go' or 'they can go anywhere'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb number agree, use plural nouns with plural subjects, use simple present for habitual actions, and correct prepositions ('go outside') and sentence structure for 'go anywhere they want to go.'