Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify the question first and then answer directly. Your reply shows confusion and contains grammatical errors. A good response should restate the question briefly if needed, use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

Example: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to the park every weekend. Because the roads were quiet in my neighbourhood, I learned to ride safely at an early age.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured opinion and support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid repeating subjects or using incorrect pronouns. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “No, they’re not very popular”), then add 1–2 reasons and a short example. Use linking words like “because” or “however.” Keep sentences concise and natural.

Example: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because public infrastructure is geared towards cars. For example, many cities lack dedicated bike lanes, so people prefer cars for comfort and convenience.

× Did you have a bike on your on your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used incorrect prepositions and duplicated words. The correct phrase for asking about childhood possession uses the time expression 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: replace 'on your on your child' with 'when you were a child' to show the past time reference correctly. Grammar problem type ID:11

× No, not that much. Most of them they don't have and I don't like and I prefer to have cars instead to have bike.

✓ No, not that many. Most people don't have them, and I don't like bikes; I prefer to have cars instead of a bike.

Multiple issues found that match subject-verb agreement and related grammar types: 'Most of them they don't have' is redundant and unclear—use 'Most people don't have them' to match plural subject and verb. 'Not that much' should be 'not that many' when referring to countable items (bikes). 'Instead to have bike' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'instead of a bike'. Also add plural 'bikes' or singular with article 'a bike' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'Most people don't have them, and I don't like bikes; I prefer to have cars instead of a bike.' Grammar problem type ID:27