Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g. “blue colour”, “very beautiful as well as I liked it very much”). Use linking words if you add a second detail.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a bright blue bike that I loved; it had a small bell and a woven basket, so I used to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid filler words (uh) and unnatural word choices like “eminent.” Use linking words to connect reasons (for example, because, so, therefore). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and easy to use. For example, many people cycle to work in nearby neighbourhoods since it is faster than waiting for public buses.

× I really remember when I was a child I had a blue colour bike.

✓ I really remember that when I was a child I had a blue bicycle.

The sentence has a word choice and article issue rather than pluralization: 'blue colour bike' is not idiomatic in English. Use 'blue bicycle' (or 'blue bike'). Also add 'that' after 'remember' for clarity. 'Bicycle' is singular and matches the subject 'I had.' Suggestion: say 'I really remember that when I was a child I had a blue bicycle.'

× It was very beautiful as well as I liked it very much.

✓ It was very beautiful, and I liked it very much.

Using 'as well as' here creates an awkward conjunction; 'and' correctly links two coordinated clauses. Also add a comma before 'and' for readability. Suggestion: use 'and' to join two independent clauses: 'It was very beautiful, and I liked it very much.'

× Definitely, I believe that bikes are eminent in my country, uh, as compared to public vehicles.

✓ Definitely, I believe that bicycles are common in my country compared with public transport.

The adjective 'eminent' means distinguished or famous, which is incorrect here. Use 'common' or 'popular.' 'Bikes' can be 'bicycles' for formality. 'Public vehicles' is unnatural; use 'public transport' or 'public transportation.' Also replace 'as compared to' with 'compared with.' Suggestion: 'Definitely, I believe that bicycles are common in my country compared with public transport.'

× Uh, I think uh, it is very convenient method to travel one city to another city.

✓ I think it is a very convenient method to travel from one city to another.

Missing article 'a' before 'very convenient method' and incorrect preposition use: 'to travel one city to another city' should be 'to travel from one city to another.' Also remove redundant 'uh' and duplicate 'city.' Suggestion: 'I think it is a very convenient method to travel from one city to another.'