Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and disfluent. To improve: give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you rode it, who with, or a memorable moment). Keep sentences short (1–3 sentences total) and avoid repetitions. Use linking words like “and” or “so” only when needed.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it every afternoon with my neighbors, and we often raced along the riverbank, which was one of my happiest memories.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no/partly), then explain why with two specific reasons (e.g., infrastructure, culture, recent changes). Use linking words like “however” or “recently” to connect ideas. Keep sentences concise and check subject-verb agreement.

Example: They are not very popular compared with Western countries. However, cycling is becoming more common recently because cities are building bike lanes and more people want cheap, healthy transport.

× Actually, I I had a bike when I was for me, I'd like I used to play with other people all the time. Now we're really happy.

✓ Actually, I had a bike when I was a child; I used to play with other children all the time, and we were really happy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetitions and unclear phrases. This is a sentence structure error: remove the duplicated 'I', supply the missing noun 'a child' to complete 'when I was a child', replace 'for me, I'd like' with the past habit expression 'I used to', use 'other children' for clarity and parallelism, and connect ideas with appropriate punctuation/ conjunctions. Suggestion: break long fragments into coherent clauses, avoid repetition, and use established expressions for past habits (used to).

× But not that popular in the sense that in Western countries lots of people used by in our country, it is just saying that it can flow as a very capable were used by.

✓ Bicycles are not that popular here compared with Western countries where many people use them; in our country, fewer people ride bikes.

The original sentence misuses pronouns, has missing subjects, and contains unclear passive constructions. This is primarily incorrect use of pronouns and missing subjects: add a clear subject 'Bicycles' and correct comparative structure 'compared with Western countries'. Replace confusing passive/phrases like 'used by' and 'it can flow as a very capable were used by' with a simple active clause 'many people use them' and state contrast 'fewer people ride bikes' for clarity. Suggestion: identify the subject, use active verbs, and form clear comparative clauses.

× Fortunately, there is a number of people getting used to using fights, so the number of users.

✓ Fortunately, a growing number of people are getting used to riding bikes, so the number of cyclists is increasing.

This sentence has structure problems and several wrong words ('fights' instead of 'bikes', missing auxiliary verbs). Recast to 'a growing number of people are getting used to riding bikes' and complete the second clause 'so the number of cyclists is increasing.' This fixes subject-verb agreement, uses correct vocabulary, and completes the thought. Suggestion: use the phrase 'getting used to' with a gerund ('riding') and ensure the result clause is explicit and grammatical.