Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer clearer, more grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and vocabulary errors (e.g. "writing" → "riding", clarify who gave the bike). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Example: No, I didn't have my own bike when I was a child, but my cousin had one. I used to ride it almost every day, and because I enjoyed it so much he eventually gave it to me as a present.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct opinion first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. "roads that not stable them" → "roads are not stable") and avoid confusing phrases like "tents even in soil roads." Provide one clear example or consequence to make the point convincing.

Example: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many roads are unpaved and unsafe for cycling. For example, rural areas often have dirt tracks full of potholes, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars instead of bicycles.

× No, I didn't have a bike, but my cousin had and I used to ride it almost every day and I like writing it so much he gave it to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but my cousin did, and I used to ride it almost every day. I liked it so much that he gave it to me.

Errors: incorrect past tense forms and sentence run-on. 'My cousin had' should be 'my cousin did' to avoid repeating the verb 'have' in short form (subject-verb consistency). 'I like writing it so much' is present tense and unclear; the intended meaning is past preference, so use past 'I liked it so much'. Also the sentence was run-on and needed splitting and adding 'that' to link cause and result. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when talking about childhood and split long sentences into simpler clauses.

× No, no, I don't think so because in my country there are roads that not stable them.

✓ No, I don't think so because in my country there are roads that are not stable.

Errors: incorrect word order and extraneous pronoun. 'that not stable them' is ungrammatical: relative clause needs verb 'are' ('that are not stable') and 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect. Suggestion: use 'that are not stable' or 'which are unstable' to form a correct relative clause.

× In my country the roads are very unstable and there are tents even in soil roads and I haven't seen any.

✓ In my country the roads are very unstable, and there are tents even on dirt roads, so I haven't seen many bicycles.

Errors: incorrect preposition and unclear reference. 'soil roads' is unnatural; use 'dirt roads'. Preposition should be 'on dirt roads'. The final clause 'I haven't seen any' lacks a clear object; it likely refers to bicycles, so specify 'many bicycles' or 'any bicycles'. Also combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: use clear nouns after pronouns and correct prepositions ('on') when describing location.