Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct the grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and incorrect phrases (e.g. “with yellow color our”, “not longer as much”, “engine” for a pedal bike).

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small yellow bicycle when I was a child. However, it often needed repairs because the chain and brakes worn out, so I usually fixed it myself or asked my father to help.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and correct plural forms and word order. Avoid repetition and incomplete endings.

Example: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular in my region because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many families own at least one motorcycle for commuting to work or the market, so bikes are more common than cars.

× I had a bike uh, with yellow color our in my childhood, but uh, it was not longer as much because the engine was not at all good.

✓ I had a bike with a yellow color in my childhood, but it did not last long because the engine was not good.

Errors: incorrect word order and adjective use ('yellow color our' and 'not longer as much'), wrong tense/verb choice ('it was not longer' should be 'it did not last long'). Suggestion: use 'with a yellow color' or simply 'a yellow bike', and use 'did not last long' to express duration in the past. Use past simple for completed events and correct collocations ('last long').

× So most of the time it I have to be prepared the bike.

✓ So most of the time I had to prepare the bike.

Errors: extraneous words and incorrect tense/form ('it I have to be prepared the bike'). Suggestion: remove unnecessary pronouns, use past simple 'had to' for obligation in the past, and use active verb 'prepare the bike' rather than passive 'be prepared the bike'. Keep subject-verb-object order: 'I had to prepare the bike.'

× Yes I do because more in a in my state most of the people have more bikes than the cars and also in our country most of the peoples loves to ride bikes.

✓ Yes, I do, because in my state most people have more bikes than cars and in our country most people love to ride bikes.

Errors: redundant/misplaced words ('more in a in my state'), plural/word choice issues ('the peoples', 'loves'), and article misuse ('the cars'). Suggestions: use 'most people' (not 'peoples'), use plural verb 'love' to match plural subject, remove unnecessary 'the' before plural general noun 'cars', and simplify phrase order. Keep present simple for general facts.

× So I think bike is the popular popular and also very.

✓ So I think bikes are very popular.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch ('bike is' vs general statement), repetition and incomplete phrasing ('popular popular and also very'). Suggestion: when making general statements use plural subject 'bikes are' or 'the bike is popular' with 'the' and complete adjective 'popular'. Use concise structure: 'bikes are very popular.'