Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
No, my family is very poor. We don't have enough money.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, if you don't have enough money you can buy a bike. But uh. I think it's the cheapest.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答需更自然并直接回应问题,同时避免过于负面的自我陈述。可以用一句主题句说明没有自行车并给出简短原因或回忆,句子不超过5句,使用连接词衔接信息。注意语气更客观,不要重复信息或用语断断续续。
Example: No, I didn't have a bike as a child because my family couldn't afford one. Instead, I often walked to school or used public transport. I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbour's bike on weekends, which felt like a special treat.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答需要更完整且自然,先直接回答(Yes/No)然后给出具体理由与细节,用连接词如“because”或“so”使逻辑更清晰。避免犹豫语(uh)并用更合适的词汇描述自行车流行的原因或场景。句子总数不超过5句。
Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people use them for commuting to work or school, especially in crowded cities where traffic is bad. Additionally, cycling is encouraged as a healthy and eco-friendly option.
× No, my family is very poor. We don't have enough money.
✓ No, my family was very poor. We didn't have enough money.
原句在回答过去是否拥有自行车的问题(Did you have... when you were a child?)时,使用了现在时(is / don't have),与提问的过去时间不一致。应使用过去时:"was" 和 "didn't have"。建议:在描述过去的情况时把动词改为过去式(be 动词用 was/were,其他动词用动词的过去式)。
× Yes, if you don't have enough money you can buy a bike. But uh. I think it's the cheapest.
✓ Yes, if you don't have enough money you can buy a bike. But, I think it's the cheapest option.
第一句是一般现在时,用于陈述事实可以保留。但第二句“it's the cheapest”表达不完整,听起来像缺少比较对象或名词。可改为 "the cheapest option" 来明确意思。句中断句“But uh.”应合并或用逗号连接,并避免口头语“uh”。建议:保持条件句的一致时态;表达“最便宜”的时候补全名词或比较对象,减少口头语。