Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct small grammar/redundancy issues, and add a specific short detail (when/where or how long) to make the answer more vivid. Use one clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details linked smoothly.

Example: Yes, I did. I used my big brother's bicycle because I didn't own one; I practiced on it in the park near our house every weekend until I could ride confidently.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear main idea and concise supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and article use). Add a brief suggestion or comparison to enrich content.

Example: Yes, many people own bicycles, but they are less practical for daily travel here because roads are narrow, poorly maintained and lack dedicated bike lanes. As a result, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for commuting.

× I used my big brother's bicycle because I didn't have one of my own, and I used that to practice how to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I used my big brother's bicycle because I didn't have one of my own, and I used it to practise how to ride a bike.

The phrase 'how to learn how to ride a bike' is redundant and unidiomatic. The verb pattern 'learn to do' or simply 'how to do' should be used. Changing to 'how to ride a bike' removes the unnecessary repetition. Also, 'used that' is less natural than 'used it' when referring to the bicycle. Note: 'practise' (UK) or 'practice' (US) spelling depending on variety.

× Yes, but it's harder to use a bicycle around here because the roads are not good and it's so narrow and there are there are there are no proper bicycle lanes, so it's harder to use bicycle as a transport.

✓ Yes, but it's harder to use a bicycle around here because the roads are not good, they are narrow, and there are no proper bicycle lanes, so it's harder to use a bicycle as a means of transport.

Several issues: 'it's so narrow' incorrectly uses singular 'it' to refer to 'roads'; use 'they are narrow' to match plural noun (subject-verb agreement). The repetition 'there are there are there are' is a speech disfluency and must be removed. 'use bicycle as a transport' is unidiomatic; use 'a bicycle' and 'as a means of transport' or 'for transport'. These corrections fix agreement, remove repetition, and improve phrasing.