Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời nên dùng thì quá khứ hoàn chỉnh và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lẫn lộn thì (ví dụ dùng "I usually rode" hoặc "I used to ride"). Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi mở rộng bằng chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ địa điểm, tần suất hoặc cảm xúc). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như "and" hoặc "because" để nối ý.

Example: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood with my friends almost every afternoon when I was ten, and we often raced each other for fun because there were many quiet streets near our houses.

Suggestion: Tránh tiếng ấp úng và những từ không rõ ("MMM"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng như "Not really" hoặc "They are less popular now" và dùng thì hiện tại cho tình trạng chung ("are" thay vì "used"). Bổ sung lý do cụ thể, ví dụ chi phí, cơ sở hạ tầng, hoặc xu hướng công nghệ, và dùng liên từ (because/so) để logic hơn.

Example: Not really. Bikes are less popular now because rapid modernisation has made electric scooters and cars more affordable and convenient, and many people prefer them for longer commutes.

× Yes, of course. I usually ride my bike around my neighborhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually rode my bike around my neighborhood with my friends.

The question asks about the past (When you were a child?), so the verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Change 'ride' to 'rode' to correctly indicate a habitual action in the past. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual past actions (usually + past simple).

× Not MMM to be honest. Uh, due to modernisation most people in my country used electric cars.

✓ Not much, to be honest. Uh, due to modernization most people in my country use electric cars.

There are two issues: 'MMM' appears to be a filler and should be 'much'. The sentence also mixes past tense 'used' with a present meaning; if discussing current popularity of bikes, use present simple 'use'. Also 'modernisation' can be spelled 'modernization' (both are acceptable variants; choose one consistently). Suggestion: Use present simple when describing general current facts and correct filler words to 'much'.