Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Улучшите развернутость и естественность ответа. Дайте тему в первом предложении, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с конкретикой (когда, с кем, почему вам нравилась велосипед). Используйте связки (for example, when, because) и избегайте однословных ответов.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to my friend's house every afternoon. For example, I remember practicing riding without training wheels in the park because I wanted to feel more independent.

Suggestion: Ответ не по теме и неясен — начните с прямого мнения, затем обоснуйте его конкретными причинами. Используйте связки (because, however, for instance) и избегайте повторов. Приведите конкретные примеры проблем (дороги, инфраструктура, безопасность) и, при необходимости, сравнение с прошлым или другими странами.

Example: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is mainly because there is a lack of safe cycling infrastructure, such as bike lanes and secure parking, so many people prefer cars. For instance, on most busy roads there are no dedicated lanes, which makes cycling dangerous and uncomfortable.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a simple past yes/no question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. The student responded with 'Yes, I had.' which is grammatically awkward because 'have' in a past yes/no question is typically answered with the auxiliary did: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: use the auxiliary that matches the question (did) in short answers to past simple questions.

× And why the inspection is not happening? I don't think so, because we have not a good way for driving, driving.

✓ No, I don't think so, because we do not have good roads for driving.

The original contains several issues: 'And why the inspection is not happening?' is an out-of-context fragment and uses incorrect word order for a question; it should be 'And why is the inspection not happening?' if intended as a question. The main answer 'I don't think so, because we have not a good way for driving, driving.' has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Have not a good way' is unnatural; English uses 'do not have' and 'way' is not the correct noun for roads—use 'roads' or 'infrastructure'. Repetition of 'driving' is unnecessary. Suggestion: form clear replies that match the question: use 'No, I don't think so, because we do not have good roads for driving.' or 'No, I don't think so, because our roads are not very good.'