Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friend and I remember sailing without trying whilst you need. I felt confined.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
No, I think bicycle are not popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然且紧扣问题,先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句具体支持细节。避免无关或不通顺的表达(例如“sailing without trying whilst you need”“I felt confined”不清楚)。可用连接词(e.g., because, so, when)使句子更连贯,并控制在5句以内。
Example: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friend because it was our favorite way to spend time outdoors. We often raced each other along the river path and stopped for ice cream afterwards, which made those outings memorable.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答过于简短且缺乏支持细节。应先直接回答(Yes/No),然后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持观点,例如谈交通习惯、基础设施或安全问题,并用连接词衔接。确保语法正确(注意单复数和冠词)。
Example: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars for convenience and there are few dedicated bike lanes. As a result, cycling is often seen as unsafe and mainly used for recreation rather than daily commuting.
× I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friend and I remember sailing without trying whilst you need. I felt confined.
✓ I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friend, and I remember falling without trying when you need. I felt confined.
句子中原本的單字 "sailing" 用法不正確,應為表示「跌倒」的動詞 "fall" 的現在分詞 "falling" (present participle)來表達「不小心跌倒」的意思。根據第10類(Verb in the present participle form),需要使用現在分詞形式來與 "remember" 一類動詞配合(例:remember doing sth. 表示記得做過某事)。另外原句中的片語 "whilst you need" 也不合上下文與語法,改為 "when you need" 仍不通順;若想表達「我記得不經意跌倒」,應直接寫成 "I remember falling without trying." 因此建議改為:"I remember falling without trying." 最後將句子用逗號連接,使結構更清楚:"...with my friend, and I remember falling without trying. I felt confined." 建議:1) 學習常見動詞與現在分詞搭配(如 remember doing, enjoy doing, avoid doing)。2) 檢查片語是否與上下文匹配,避免使用不相關連的連接詞(如 whilst you need)。3) 讀完整句確認是否自然通順。
× No, I think bicycle are not popular in my country.
✓ No, I think bicycles are not popular in my country.
這裡屬於第1類(Singular and plural issue):名詞單複數使用錯誤。句中主語是泛指自行車這類事物,應使用複數形式 "bicycles" 或在單數前加不定冠詞作泛指(a bicycle)。同時動詞搭配也要一致:在本句結構中應使用複數名詞 "bicycles",因此改為 "bicycles are not popular"。建議:1) 判斷名詞是否為泛指整類事物,若是通常用複數(bicycles are...)或用單數加不定冠詞(A bicycle is...)。2) 學習常見的不可數與可數名詞用法,檢查主詞與動詞的一致性。