Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, use correct grammar and concise details. Start with a clear statement (Yes/No), then briefly explain why using correct tense and simpler structure. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to go to school.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear opinion sentence, use correct vocabulary (bike/bicycle), and give specific reasons with a linking word such as "because" or "however." Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: In my opinion, bicycles are not very popular in Thailand because most people prefer motorbikes or cars for commuting. However, bicycles are becoming more common in some cities for exercise and short trips.

× When I was young, because of my family have financial conditions, so I don't have anybody or when I was young, I didn't have the opportunity to using a bicycle because of my father, mother is can't afford.

✓ When I was young, because my family had financial difficulties, I didn't have the opportunity to use a bicycle because my parents couldn't afford one.

Errors: 'my family have' uses plural verb with a collective noun in past context — should be 'my family had' (past tense and subject-verb agreement). 'Financial conditions' is unnatural; use 'financial difficulties'. 'I don't have anybody' is irrelevant and incorrect here; the intended meaning is lack of opportunity or money. 'the opportunity to using' mixes infinitive and gerund; correct form is 'the opportunity to use'. 'my father, mother is can't afford' has incorrect word order, auxiliary/modal placement, and agreement — use 'my parents couldn't afford one.' Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past situations, use 'parents' for both mother and father, choose 'had' for past, and use infinitive 'to use'.

× In my opinion, let's stay in Thailand, buy is not popular because of normally they're using motorbike or car to transportation. So I think in my country buy is not popular and.

✓ In my opinion, in Thailand, bicycles are not popular because people usually use motorbikes or cars for transportation. So I think bicycles are not popular in my country.

Errors: 'let's stay in Thailand' is an odd phrase; use 'in Thailand' to indicate location. 'buy is not popular' is a misspelling of 'bike' and also wrong noun form; use 'bicycles are not popular' (plural subject and correct verb). 'because of normally they're using' has wrong word order; use 'because people usually use'. 'to transportation' uses wrong preposition; correct is 'for transportation'. The final fragment 'and.' is incomplete. Suggestions: place prepositional phrases before or after main clause correctly, use 'usually' for frequency, and use 'for' with 'transportation'.