Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I do.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I think bikes are popular in your country. I always see many people ride bikes in the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答不符合时态且过于简短。请使用正确时态(过去时)并给出一到两句具体细节来支持你的回答,例如谁给你的车、什么时候开始骑以及你是否常常骑。连接词可用于衔接句子。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 有事实描述但有语法和指代错误(“your country”应为“my country”),句子稍显重复。请改正指代,使用连接词给出具体原因或场景,例如哪些人群骑车、在哪些城市或什么时候更常见。尽量控制在最多五句话内。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, students and office workers often cycle to school or work, especially in the mornings and evenings when traffic is heavy.
× Yes, I do.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句回答使用現在時態“do”,但問題是過去時“Did you have...?”,因此應使用過去時回答。建議將助動詞改為過去式“did”,或直接回答“Yes, I had.” 這樣時態與提問一致。
× Yes, I think bikes are popular in your country.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.
學生將“your country”(你的國家)誤用,面對考官應談論自己國家的情況,應使用“my country”。建議注意人稱代詞的指向,當說自己國家時使用“my”。
× I always see many people ride bikes in the street.
✓ I always see many people riding bikes in the street.
在動詞短語“see sb. doing sth.”中,應使用動名詞“riding”表示正在發生的動作;原句用原形“ride”不符合這種結構。建議將“ride”改為“riding”以保持語法正確。